My Demon

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  1. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    I am sitting here alone in my sweet insaity
    Waiting for you to free me from this pain
    I want to run away from everything, run away from you
    But you keep ahold of me to make me face it all
    Can't you see I have to run to keep my mind alive
    I can not keep on going on this way.

    No matter how much I try I can never win
    Not untill I ecape from you, and that is what I'll do
    I will ecape and be free so there nothing you can do
    I will break you hold on me and run away for good
    I will send you my demon back to where you came
    And you will never hurt me like this again.

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    Man how long has it been since I posted a poem, well anyways here my new one, I got the idea for it from Sara's MSN screen name 'Alone in my sweet insaity' so if you like this poem, thanks her as well, if you don't...oh well
     
  2. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    Great poem with a lot of feeling. This is one of your best ones.
     
  3. Love Kingdom Keeper

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    I like the poem !!! Great Job !! * Gives a thumbs up . *:D
     
  4. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    DAMN!!! This is yet another I can relate with!! Nice work!!!
     
  5. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Thanks you guys, gald you like it
     
  6. kitty_mckechnie I want to hug you like big fuzzy Siberian bear!

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    It's a really good poem. Full of strong emotions. Great job. :D
     
  7. Azure Flame Banned

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    Wow! I like it! It's very good!
     
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