my clouded memory

my first poem:my clouded memories

my clouded memories,

I don’t remember much but ill see him again,
Again in the afterlife.
He's been waiting eight years now
And his wife has joined him.
I hated to say goodbye because i would forget him.
Though he’s in my memories,
I can only look at pictures but still it doesn’t restore the life he once had
I loved the man very much...my grandfather...
in heaven with my grandmother who died just this past summer.
They will be with me always, in
My clouded memories.

so,how does everyone like it?(first poem EVER)
and its a true poem.:(

 

*claps* alright Sora59, write, write, write ha ha, for your first poem this is really great, I wouldn't be serpised if you become better then me

 

i edited it and spell checked it how u wanted me to k,anniexo?

 

It's even better now, weldone bro

 

yay!!the best poem and story writer thinks i did WELLDONE my teachers are going to LOVE it!!!!!!!!!:D :D :D :D

 

Well that's what you get if she's your fourm sister ha ha

 

lols,yeah!!:D

 

That was really beautiful and it made me cry.

You will see them in the next life, I'm sure. *hugs*

 

oh,i didnt mean for anyone to cry!i was thinking of them so i decided to write about them(wow,i didnt my FIRST poem would make anyone cry!)