This story is about the time between the end of Kingdom Hearts : CoM and the time Sora awakens from his deep sleep. This story is told from a heart of a 15 year - old girl named Nuthura , which she keeps records of this story in her diary. Act 1 : the beginning Memento , Preserving precious memories ... Do these memories even matter ?... Heirloom , Connect the past & the present ... No family , but friends is all I have ... Tuesday I await my master's return . He said that he was going to be at Castle Oblivion all today . That means I will be stuck here waiting for DIZ all alone. Finally, DIZ has returned but he brings a young man with him along with Namine and the King. The young man's name is Riku. I never thought I will actully meet him. Wednsday I work in the lab today , DIZ is having a meeting with the King. Riku sits in a chair , next to the computer , he was monitoring Sora's Status. I walk over to him and I read what he is typing. Riku turns around and says , " What do you want Nuthura ? " I say , " Ummm ... Nothing. " He laughs. Thursday I am stuck in the Kitchen this morning cooking breakfast for everyone. Riku sneaks in and grabs a piece of bacon and sticks it between his teeth and grabs another. Before I even get to say something he is gone in a flash. Friday I check on Sora's Status today. This time Namine joins me in doing so. Riku comes in and checks on Sora too , he keeps his distance from us, but why ? Saturday I got lab duty again . This time I have to wash all the test tubes and dishes. Riku watches me as I do so. Interesting ... Sunday Today the King and DIZ are off on a mission. Riku is left behind to keep a eye on Namine and I. Riku keeps a really good eye on us. He follows me around Twilight Town everytime I go to the shops. Monday I went to the Local Supply Shop today , Riku is close behind. Act 2 : Tears ? Tuesday DIZ and the King are still gone , where could they be ? I stand in the kitchen making dinner , then suddenly , a black aura opened up from behind me. Riku steps out and looks at me . He then walks over to me , he was about to put his arms around me ,but then ,suddenly, he stops and puts his hands on his head and starts screaming in pain. I ask what is wrong but he puts his hands out infront of him and keeps me away. Riku then yells , " RUN , RUN AWAY !!! HE WILL USE ME TO KILL YOU !!! NUTHURA !!! " I ask , " Who ? who is going to kill me, Riku ? " Riku just stood there , holding back the pain then he falls backwards and falls unconsious. I run over to him. Wednsday Riku lies in bed today , I tend to his needs , no time for writing today. Thursday Riku wakes up and decides to get up today , he seems a little shakey. Friday Riku walks around the house , following me around like a child. I stop him in his tracks and I look him in the eye , I see a lot of Rage , but something else is living inside his heart , what could it be ? It was Xehanort's Heartless. Riku says , " Everytime I close my eyes he is always there. " I fall unconcious all the sudden. Saturday I wake up and I fall back asleep. Sunday Riku is out of the house today. I have to do patrol duty insted. Wednesday Still gone , too tired to write. Saturday Finally , DIZ and the King return , but Riku is still gone. Monday Riku is back. I stand in the flower garden smelling the flowers , Riku comes up from behind me. He puts a necklace on me and kisses my neck. I clutch the pendent in my hand and I take a look at it. It was a Heart - Shaped locket , gold plated and with picture of Riku inside it, as I open it , it plays a haunting tune. I thank Riku by hugging him. Tuesday What is this feeling ? It is so warm. I lay in bed all day feeling it . Act 3 : Ashes to ashes and dust to dust . Monday I lay in the fields of grass that surrond the outskirts of Twilight Town. I feel the breeze flow through my hair , Riku joins me . Tuesday Riku and I are informed that we are going to do a mission on Thursday , we must retrieve Roxas. Roxas ? Sora's nobody and a old friend ? What will become of this ? Wednesday Riku and I sit on the clock tower , I give Riku a blindfold to help him control Xehanort's Heartless , it seems to work. Thursday Riku and I get on the train that goes to TWTNW. We finally reach TWTNW and I step out first , I snap my fingers and I dress myself in a Org . 13 suite , Riku gives me a walky-talky just incase. We split up , I go left and he goes right. I run through the rain so I can get around quickly . I stop for a little to get a glipse of the place , it was very dark, but then a flash of lightning lights up the place , I see a outline of a tall man in a coat. I have been spotted !! I jump up on top of the building , I take out a flash light and I point it at the man . It was Axel , looking up at me , he jumps up on top the building with me and says , " Little Niemie why are you here ? " I say , " I am looking for Roxas." Axel says , " Why for ? " I say , " So he can wake up Sora . " Axel turns angry and yells , " NO !! I am not letting you take Roxas away !!!! " Fire starts behind him and he takes out his chakrams , Axel lunges forward and puts his finger on my forehead and I black out. I wake up , Nearby Roxas and Riku were fighting , I watch. Roxas knocks Riku on his back , Roxas walks over to Riku and slashes him , Riku lies on the ground , blood pouring out onto the ground. I run over to him but as I turn around Roxas slashes at me with his keyblade and I am knocked backwards into a wall , Riku screams my name. I get up and I look at Roxas , he starts spinning his keyblades and walks towards me , his keyblades spinning , Riku shouts my name again. Roxas slashes at me . I fall to the ground , badly injuried. Roxas picks me up in his arms and teleports away with me. Black out. These are the first three chapters of my story , also known as acts , please tell me your opinions please , thank you for reading my story. :)
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