Traditional Art My best drawing (i think you guys will like)

here is my greatiest draw I could ever draw. the siginture you see down there is mine.

 

Ooooh. Awesome job! The eyes could be a bit more smaller but that's all! Good job!

 

if they get any smaller, then they would be eyes of a guy.

 

I see. Okay then. :3

 

Wow Luna~

I agree this is aweome! Good job!! ;D

 

sharper mouth, smaller features, less on the body, I think theres too much curves.

 

The waist is really tiny compared to the...er...chest. Her eyes are too big, and you can make them a little smaller without making them guy eyes. Other than that though, this is really good :)

 

Lmao. That one is pretty good. I mean, you know, for some people it is pretty hard for smoe people to be able to draw a torso like that, ya know

 

I like it, but the arms seem different from the rest of the body.

 

Eyes are too big, lacks a third dimension, has incorrectly proportioned body structure, and employs faulty physics in the clothing's construction and layers. Overall it doesn't look very good. Reference pictures are your friends. If you want me to recant or elaborate, just say so.

 

The waist seems too small for the chest. I think the shoulders are too broad. The eyes are too big for the face.

Other than that, it's quite perfect. Try shading it a little, if you want.