I was very bored today because my mom took my cell phone, cordless phone, and iPod away, so I decided to write some sort of song. A few minutes later, I came up with a good intro to it on my piano, and now my older brother and cousin are wanting to record it. Anyways, here it is. And yes, I know the title sucks. Verse 1: Free flowing like poetry, like a river Forgiven, letting go of me, myself, and I A melody and a harmony blending together Forever into another song, another rhyme Chorus 1: But I hope you're happy, so you can just go on without me I'll sit here for eternity Write some song you'll never see And make my broken fingers bleed Smashing these piano keys Verse 2: Alone in darkness I'm of no importance, just someone who Used to love you, but you're gone and so is everything we shared Once again a heart is broken, and it's so hard to open up to anyone Yeah, no one will listen because then don't even care Chorus 2: But I hope you're happy, so you can just go on without me I'll sit here for eternity Write some song you'll never see Cut my fingers, make them bleed Strumming these guitar strings (Guitar solo) Bridge: Oh, the music has betrayed me Like you did long ago If anybody's out there, please save me And I don't even know what to do My musical pain was wasted on you (Drum solo) Chorus 3: But at least I know you're happy (that's all that matters to me) And you're doing fine without me (But before you leave) Here's my last song, I wrote it for you But you won't hear it, you never do Although my broken heart will never mend For you I'll never sing again So I hope you're happy to finally live your life without me I'll sit for always and eternity And all my songs you'll get to see No longer do my fingers bleed Smashing these piano keys (Strumming these guitar strings) 'Cause no one will remember me I know, I know. It a whole bunch of jibberish, but I was bored. Also, my brother and cousin told me to put in some guitar and drum solos. EDIT: I know, it sucks. BAD.
Honestly, it's really not that bad. I kinda liked it. It was pretty and, the way I imagined it, flowed well. If they do record it, post it on here so we can hear. I'd love to see the turn out.
