Remember that doodle of Namine that I posted a few days ago? Well, here is the full color version: (here is the Deviant Art link) http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/56180876/ CnC please!!!
Coloring improves quality up to 40% :3 I think it looks a lot better colored- my only crits are there isn't quite a defined light source and her lower body seems somewhat misplaced. Very nice job.
Thanks! You cant really tell because her sketch book is mostly in the way, but she's standing at an angle, with her hips leaning towards her left (our right). So that explains that.
This is really good.The lighting on her is perfect.and the way shes like bend suits her position.The sketchbook is really well done.Great Job on this.
Coloring looks amazing and i like the lyrics in the background. This is one of my favorites ive seen on this site.
I can see what you mean, but the way her shoulders and face are facing directly ahead kind of demotes that angle. :\ Unless you don't mean angle, but rather putting her weight on the protruding leg.
Ooh, that is pretty *_* I like her nose *pinches it* Looks much better when it's colored. Her arm though, is still really long. The forearm is suppposed to be the same size as the arm. (shoulder to elbow)
O.O I like the text and effects a lot nice. She looks a little scewed (Like more on oneside than the other). Much better with colouring.
