Traditional Art more kh junkies

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older kairi as a bussiness woman..... honest opinions plz

 

Not bad. Maybe a little more shading in some areas and not have the hair on her shoulders look almost transparent. Overall really well done, keep up the good work.

 

okay! thanks for teh helpi do need to work on my shading skills >>;;

 

No prob, dude. Just here to help. Yeah I still have trouble with my shading. LOL.

 

haha yea proportions is a pain in the *** too. i've seen lots of artists draw their arms bigger than there necks i dont think im any better lol >>;

 

No I say you do a good job with your proportions.

 

She looks a little...stout...maybe it's just because I can't see a neck. Sorry if I sounded mean. T_T

 

no its okay i use ur guys comment to help me improve :]

 

Okay, so I *attempted* to do a redline on this. When I say attempt I mean the pen to my tablet isn't working right so itdoes this ghey crap where even when I'm not touching the pad [which is like clicking with a mouse] it acts like I'm performing a click. So it's kind of like drawing without picking up my pen. Some of the lines look loopy because of that, and I can't really sketch anything out.



Basically her head is too big for the rest of her body. I tried to correct it kind of, but if you want to keep it like that I have a purple pen showing how to correct her facial features. Currently her head is kind of at a tilted position, which is strage with her straight eyes/nose/mouth. Her arms are kind of short for her, but I'm thinking that's more of a style thing. I wasn't really sure what to do with that. ^^;;

Her boot's position made it look like her foot was unnaturally twisted, so I moved it forward a bit. Her other leg looks akward...but I don't really know why. Proportion wise he hips were kind of small for her bust and head, so I tried to give her more of an hourglass figure than a spoon. Her calves were pretty large in comparison to the rest of her leg, so I tried to disribute it evenly.

Feature related her eyes were kind of at the same position. Note that when a character's face is at an angle they tend to be oppsitely shaped horizontally.

I won't bother with shading since people here have already covered it~

 

wow i gotta thank you for doing that :] i knew i had some things wrong with the proportions so thanks for taking the time to point it all out :D ill try to improve!:o

 

No problem, it only took a few minutes anyway~