Moonlit Darkness

okay....i'm starting this new story...so if u can plz. rate it.....if u have any comments or suggestions to make the story sound bettr....emial me at.

kekeira_kurusaga@yahoo.com

kk..here we go......

Moonlit Darkness

Prologue[/SIZE]​

Long ago, in ancient lands, there lived three leaders. Each leader had their own village, their own people...and their own wealth. Suddenly, one leader became greedy and wanted all the lands for himself. The foolish leader's greed caused an argument among them. They threatened and argued with each other for more than 13 years...until the time came when the leaders decided to end the argument....with war.
The leaders prepared their armies for battle. The soldiers wore armour as thick as a man's arm, they had the best weapons made specially for them. The soldiers wore solid titanium armour, steel shields, and had their weapons made from the toughest material created-an alloy from titanium smelted with mythril and "the dark metal" found only in small quantities in the wilderness.
While the armies were being prepared, 3 heroines (along with several other civilians) gathered as much people as possible to try and oppose the war. One, Akina Chizu, from Arakystar. The other, Iku Hiroshida, from Mamorukai. And the last heroine, Akino Madsukaia, from the village of Anwan. The opposing groups came together and forced the leaders to end the war without bloodshed. the leaders had no choice,(except to execute every one of them..but then, there won't be any people left to start a community) but to surrender. The villages rejoiced in their mission's success. Unfortunately, the three heroines did not live long enough to see their hometowns prosper. They died of unknown causes four years after the war ended...​

 

omg! me know u! :D u showed this to me at school!

 

First, this is an ok prologue. Second, you should make an RP of this.

 

omg! yeah! that'd be sooo cool! u and i could talk about it at school! LOLZ

 

ummmm..

wadda mean Rp?? i'm new to this...thing.....LOLZ! Angie....i'm lost in this website .......:(

 

u called me angie! EW! lol. PM me. we can talk there. or get on IM

 

AHAHAHA! you called her angie! *hides behind Kekeira* don't kill me "angie" (sorry i had to, it is a sort of payback) Any who! I agree with them, that would make a very cool rp. :D

 

i dont get anything at all
:sleepy:

 

ohh darn...

ohhh my god........i'm only in the first chapter right now....i'llpost it uptomorrw angie k? LOL...I CAN CALL U ANGIE IF I WANT TO!!! *dark energy swarming around me* ...mhahahahahahahahaha...i fell aggressive at the moment......

 

wooo! i totally support calling her angie! cuz she can't hurt us over the comp.! :glomp:woo! can't wait for your update and\or this being made into a rp. :D

 

once i come to ur houses, ur soooooo dead! lol if you have to call me a nickname, call me lena....

 

i still dont get it

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hahahaha, you won't kill me. You've threatened sooo many times and it hasn't happened :P and no i won't call you lena, that is for everyone else. would you prefere me to call you DoReMi? *laughs manicly for no reason* :D oh yeah: Happy Thanksgiving everyone! can't wait for an update on the story

 

*sigh* i don't know why i hang out with u guys

 

cuz... well duh! we relate on such a deep and complex level.... and we are just crazy enough! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. :D

 

Lol

yay! i'm finished with chapter one in Moonlit Darkness!!! YAY!!! ENJOY.....LOL..IT HAS A CLIFFHANGER....MAYBE..I DUNNO....LOLLOLOLOLOLOLOL

 

wooo! yay, so is it a rp or is it a story we read? :D

 

weeee

it' s an RP...lol...you guys come in chapters 3 and above. LOL..we have to try to put back in evil spirits and other deadly cretres...some wil die in the attempt, some will be injured for ever...and some will survive..lol..lol...s..how do i add pictures...in my writing.....i dont know how... *sigh* :(

 

cool! can't wait for chapter 3 then! and sorry, i don't know about the pics... :stupid: but if you ask around, someone will know! :D

 

Lol!!

i can kill Angie if i want to.......but i decided someone will kill her....i dunno..one of the enemies will kill her....but even though we were rivals, i felt sorry for her and i revived her...regretfully.LOL...i love my phoenix !(Toshiro is the name of my phoenix....oh yeah about your character....what's your appearance? i have several anime pics...look cool...have a lot of weapons.