Misunderstood Feelings?

I was moved by his charm
I was touched by his looks
I was speechless by his voice

…what is this feeling?

He would sing to me, to help me sleep at night
He would call me name to make me smile
He would do something reckless to make me laugh

…I don’t understand this warm feeling?

We hold hands as we walk
We hugs me when nobody is watching

I say his name and he smiles

He takes hold of my face into his hands.

My face grows warm, he moves closer

His lips touches mine,

…and I know this feeling is…love.
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I made this, this morning. It was raining and I felt sad yet happy because it was quiet.

So tell me what you think.

 

Its good and it was raining at my house too

 

Thanks, heh rains everywhere.

 

I'd say that is beautifully written and full of feeling. I love the way there is a hidden rhythm to it. Well done.

 

Thank you, I'm not good and poems. And I thought that this one was good. I felt lonely when I did this, so yeah. Thank you again.

 

Wow thats good :D Nic job it has alot of emotion in it and its great..?? wat was u thinkin bout wen u wrote dis?

 

Love, heh why? Oh and Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

 

It's a really nice poem!! Simple, yet straight to the point!! Nice job!!

 

Really? Thank you :D