Missing You (For Demonslayer_kyle)

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Sexy Sheva, Jan 10, 2008.

  1. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    Today makes 2 weeks DSK hasn't been on, and I've been missing him alot =[
    I wrote this poem to show that I really love and miss him

    It's been too long
    that I'm sure
    I've waited for you
    forever to endure

    I'll always hold on
    to your soft touch
    I know I'm asking
    but it isn't much

    for you I cry
    for you I stay
    please tell me
    you'll be back someday

    I miss you now
    I'll miss you till
    the day I see you
    and the day I feel

    I want you back
    I miss you so much
    please don't leave
    I need your touch!

    I'll miss you now
    Leave, never
    please don't leave
    I want you forever
     
  2. Sabby Sleepy Panda Assassin

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    It's such a sweet poem but some parts didn't make sense... is "be" supposed to be "me" ? But still a really sweet poem
     
  3. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    yeah lol

    oh well its fixed now :)
     
  4. Peace and War Bianca, you minx!

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    yeah, I wondered where he was aswell, I miss him.Not the same way you do though! XD

    Its a sweet poem, its simple and effective, I like it
     
  5. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    Well, he's been gone for a while and i doubt he'll come back ;~;

    he goes missing the day i leave for Tennessee

    Thanks for the comment on my poem =]
     
  6. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    Wow... this was a wonderful poem... it almost made me cry... lol... good work ^^

    I'm waiting for somebody to come back, too... he gets on every day... but only for about 5 seconds and then logs off... and I'm never on when he is... I just wonder if he'll ever come back and talk to me...


    I just have to say... once again... great poem and keep up the great work ^^