mintros tale

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  1. micketymike Twilight Town Denizen

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    ok im at the very begining of this book im writing but heres the first couple lines

    Mintro awoke and hurryed to grab his note book. he opened it to the first page and mumbeled to himslef "what a strange dream." he grabed his quill and began to retell his dream onto the paper.

    "is it all over? i meen look at this place. is this my future? just juin? and the shadows theyre not only shadows but people. but how? oh i see thats how.

    then blank he forgot the rest of the dream. holding the paper befor him he read it to himself. suddenly wind burst through the tent riping the paper from his hande and carrying it in to the trees. mintro sat back down disappointed but relaxed. "BREAKFAST!" came a voice making mintro jump so high he banged his head on the top of his tent. "im coming," he called to his sister and he slipped his sneekers on

    he exited the tent and put some bacon and pancakes on a plate "mmmm" he said sacasim in his voice "this looks wonderfull" areana looked at him and in a calm voice said "well its all we got so be thankful" mintro sighed and said" thankyou"over a mouthfull of bacon. rolling his eyes he walked in to the woods "where do you think your going"areana said scoldingly."into the woods where we left tomotorro remember"areana looked at him but said nothing as he left the camp as he walked through the trees low branches whiped at his face some poking at his eyes and cutting his cheeks. in response he streached his arms in frount of him with an upsetting effect. the branches got pused back by his arms and came back and hit his face. this soon became agrivating and he began to run.twigs snaped inall directions without his notice finally one of the different figures triped creating a load thud.

    the figure shot a blast of fire and missed .the fire disolved on contactmaking it obios this was a kind of fire he did not want to mess with. he turned around and ran about two steps when he pushed into a large clearing making him fall to the groun from the sudden easyness of mooving.


    any ideas for more reply
    this is not all and im going to edit this to have more detais soon
     
  2. Desaray Traverse Town Homebody

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    Nice ^^ I like it so far. curiouse though =)
    very curiouse
     
  3. micketymike Twilight Town Denizen

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    thats the trick to making readers finish the book
     
  4. Destined Working for WDW

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    interesting, i'm curious to see how this turns out :)