Hey everyone, well me and my cousin (KillerX) have been having this poem war (Well, more like... *points to the below* whatever the hel those things are wars) for the last few days where we make poems to counter each other's... i don't think he knows i've posted this so i'ma tell him tommoz, but i figured that some of them were pretty good so i might as well post them... this does not have who did what because we normally have influence over each-other when we make these which means the credit for all of them is 50-50... also some of these aren't so good but i kept them cause they had some meaning to the two of us so... yeah... soz! ^-^' -------------------------------- I'm like an unsolved puzzle an issue you can't solve i'm always on your mind and you can't sovle why You're like a thread of hair you keep on growing back which is why i have the scissors waiting for you to come back you're like paper used and writing on which is why i don't care what you say I find you kinda funny i find you kinda sad i find it hard to tell you you find it hard to take i'm the last piece of the puzzle, the thing you left behind, the thing under your couch, or waiting behind, the one you don't notice, or the one you ignore, no matter how you look at it, i'm the one you don't adore. I'm the puzzle no one solves, i'm the one no one knows, if you wanna see me again, then help me live this live of dread. sin is evil, evil is life, life is pointless, so is sin. no one can control us, for we are we, forget about life, and live a while, for life is short, and life is dull, if sins are unforgiven, lets all party! death is the end, the end is inevitable, a battle brings death, so battle is the end, but if you survive battle, then you have skipped the ending, and the ending is inevitable. If we fight our time has come, as we see our lives before each others eyes, they speak of sin as a type of evil, but we see sin as meaningless, as it does nothing to harm us, if it shall ever harm us, we shall strike back with vengance, if we shall lose, our name forever herd! I'm like an unseen eclipse, like a part of history, you just haven't read the book, to know why i've come back to look. ------------------------------- Thanks for reading, and if anyone liked any of them i might post some more of them later... Thanks Again, Dmaster.
Hey all im KillerX Dmaster's cuz... i'm gonna post some more so here they are! Sadness is between our feet, Happiness is one step away, That step no one will take, So sorrow I feel, For those lazy ****ers! If life is behind us, And we are old, Time has worn on us, For we have lived our life, But if life is meaningless, So are we If I, you forgot, Then that makes us forgotten, For we can only cause, Destruction for one another, If this happens forget about life, And have a little fun! If a sword can hit, Shall it damage? Like an arrow, It can only do damage, If it hits, But if it hits, Shall you die? If life is short, Why wait to find out! Shall the darkness fall upon us? We shall arm ourselves, Our shadows will follow, Are sins really forgiven? ------------------------------------- Thanks for readin... need help with some poems... feel free to ask me or my cuz! c'ya all! KillerX
I like a lot of these little poems :D Most are like, "life is short" and "have some fun" Lol. Good job.
lol they are good and i'm working on lots more... i plan on posting heeps but i can't think of any "right" now thought but sooner or later i will think of some... if you have any ideas PM me :]
