Ok this takes place during the time Mickey was Yen Sid's aprentice. I'm not very good at wringting storys so please forgive me, and tell me what you think. Sorry the first chapter is so short. promice the others will be longer! _______________________________________________________________________________________ A young boy walked alone on a battered empty street. His wiled green eyes were almost completely hidden by his tangled, dirty, dark blond hair. He walked slowly, and took slow heavy breaths. He couldn't remember the last time he had, had a descent nights sleep. Everything started to get fuzzy, and then he collapsed. He could hear footsteps coming closer, and closer, until he could see the shadow of someone standing over him. "OH! Hey, are you ok?" a male voice asked. "Don't worry...I'll get you some help!" The boy could feel himself being lifted, and then carried, but his eyes felt to heavy, and soon he was un conches
cool!!!*hugs* just make sure all the spelling errors are gone, a lot of people are picky about that!!! but good story, but you might want to make the backround more clear to people! is still thought it was good.
Chapter 2 The boy woke up in a room that had star windows and seemed much like a tower. He sat up, and pulled his blond hair out of his face. He looked around the room curiously, and then he saw the door open slowly. A mouse walked in wearing a black outfit, that had the pants and shirt attached and a small jacket. "Well hi there fellah. I didn't expect you up for at least another hour. You were pretty mest up. What happened to you?" the mouse asked The boy backed up afraid. He looked at the mouse with eyes that were much like the ones of a terrified little animal. ""Oh don't be scared little fellah...I'm not gonna hurt you! I promise. Oh! I almost forgot...my name's Mickey." Mickey said The boy seemed to calm down, but still stayed silent. "Well...I guess I'll leave you be" Mickey said a little depressed. Mickey turned to leave when... "W-wait!" the boy said in a scratchy voice that had apparently not been used in a log time. "yes?" Mickey asked turning to face the boy. "I-I wasn't trying to be mean I just..." he started looking down "It's ok...you must have been throw a lot..." Mickey said to him sweatly "Now why don't you tell me your name" "I-I don't have one" he said sadly. "well then we will just have to get you one...hmmmm...Yen Sid will probably know a good one" Mickey said. "lets go see him." Mickey led the boy out of the room, and up the stares towards Yen Sid's room.
Chapter 3 Mickey led the boy to the highest room in the tower/castle. "That sure is a tiring walk." Mickey said rubbing the sweat off his forehead. The boy nodded then looked at the door nervously. Mickey seamed to notes. "Don't worry. He's nice." Mickey encouraged opening the door, and walking in With the boy. An older man was siting at a desk looking at some papers. There were quit a few bookshelves full with books of all kinds. "Hello Mickey. I see your new friend is awake and feeling better." Yen Sid said looking up at them "Yes he is Master Yen Sid, but we have a question..." Mickey started " And what is that?" Yen Sid asked "Well...he doesn't have a name and well..." Mickey said not sure how to asked. "and you want me to fined a name for him?" Yen Sid asked "Yes sir" Mickey said "Ok...come over here" he said to the boy. The boy looked nerves, but Mickey gave him an encouraging look. The boy walked up to Yen Sid, and after a second of Yen Sid looking him over Yen Sid decided. "Erin" Yen Sid said then got back to work. "Well there you go now you've got a name." Mickey said They left Yen Sid's office and headed down the stairs.
Chapter 4 part 1 thanks for all the replies! __________________________________________________ _____________________________________ Mickey led Erin down the stairs, and outside...well...as much outside as there was. "So....do you like your new name?" Mickey asked Erin "Yeah. It's better then not having a name" Erin replied looking around. "So how did you get here?" Mickey asked "I don't know...I remember fighting an evil man and his apprentice, and next thing I know I am here trembling in pain" Erin said. "Wow! you fight?" Mickey asked Erin nodded with a grin. "Can you keep a secret?' Erin asked Mickey Mickey nodded. Erin backed up, and then somend a keyblade. "WOW!" Mickey exclaimed in shock. "Are you a keyblade bearer?" "No I'm a..." __________________________________________________ _____________________________________ can anyone guess what Erin is? if you get it wright you get a cookie
no but nice try __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ "I'm a Chaser" Erin said "What is a Chaser?" Mickey asked confused "Chasers are people that has one reason in life and that reason is to protect the balance between light and dark" Erin answer "The balance between light and dark?" Mickey asked very confused "Yes. Light and Dark have to be balanced. If one is stronger than the other it could cause the worlds to be thrown off balance and they would even be destroyed!" Erin explained "THAT'S HORIBUL!!!!" Mickey exclaimed "Yeah...That is why we Chasers exist. If one becomes more powerful than the other we have to do anything that will restore the balance...even if it means taking life's" Erin said looking down "YOU KILL PEOPLE?!?!?!?!?!" Mickey asked shocked "Yes, but only if it was absolutely necessary" Erin said "I see...Have you ever been to any other worlds besides yours and this one?" Mickey asked "yeah! I've been to tuns!" Erin said happily "What were they like?" Mickey asked curiously "well...they were all so different...wonder land is crazy and silly! nothing makes since there! Twilight town is fun and peaceful! I do have to say my favorite one is Destiny island! It is beautiful and peaceful!" Erin said reminiscing "Wow! That sound wonderful!" Mickey said "It is! You should visit there someday" Erin said but suddenly he felt light headed and everything went dark
Erin woke up hours later. The room was dark, and there wasn't a single sound. "What is wrong with me? Ever since the accident this crazy stuff has been happening to me!" Erin said to himself very confused. "Worried?" an older man's voice asked Erin looked around wildly. He knew this voice far to well. suddenly a portal appeared in the room, and an old man walked out with a younger man in a strange suit. "NO! IT CAN'T BE! IT JUST CAN'T BE YOU!" Erin yelled in shock. His eyes filled with fear and he moved as far away as he could, but the man just kept walking closer. "I see you remember me...I'm so honored." the man mocked "This can't be! I thought you were dead!" Erin yelled in shock "Well then I'm afraid you thought wrong!" the man said with an evil smile, and then the younger man charged straight at Erin. Erin was filled with fear and, all he could do was scream. His heart rat quickly increased, and he was suddenly filled with pain. He fell to the ground, and he could feel his body be picked up. "HEY! PUT HIM DOWN!!!!" Mickey yelled running into the room, but was quickly knocked unconscious by a blast of darkness from the old man. The old man made a new portal, and him, the younger man, and Erin left through it. [The next morning] Mickey woke up, and in a sudden jab of pain he remembered everything that had happened the night before, and ran to Yen Sid's study as fast as his legs would carry him. "MASTER YEN SID! THEY TOOK HIM!" Mickey yelled still in shock "Who took who?" Yen Sid asked confused. "These men came, and just took Erin! I think he knew them....Yen Sid...did you know Erin is a chaser?" Mickey asked "Yes...I was hoping that this day was a long way off. Mickey....to save your new friend...you will have to find the chasers named Terra, Aqua, and Ven..." Yen Sid said gravely
