Memory Break Chapter 1

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What do you think of Memory Break so far?

  1. SO SAD!!! *wants to read more*

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  2. I HATE IT! *kicks story*

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  3. Awwwww....*feels bad* It's too sad! I don't want to read anymore!

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  4. AH HA!!!! That is hilarious!!!!!

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  1. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Okay, the new story is here! According to when I closed the poll (not to what the poll results are now) Memory Break was the winner! So here is chapter 1! enjoy! :D

    ~Chapter 1~

    “Happy Birthday Luxord!†Roxas shouted as Luxord came walking down the stairs into the kitchen. He smiled.
    “Thanks!†he said. Axel then came walking in from outside.
    “Hey, mister 24!†he said cheerfully. “Where are you going to celebrate your Birthday?†Luxord looked at him, smiling.
    “Well, me, Xigbar, and Xaldin were planning to go out to a club tonight. It’s in a world called ‘The Real World’.†He said. Axel cocked his head.
    “ ‘The Real World?’ I’ve never heard of that place before.†Axel said. Luxord shrugged.
    “I haven’t either. Xigbar said it’d be a nice place to have some fun.†He smiled again. “And best of all—he says there are no Heartless or Nobodies there.†Axel nodded, smiling, and walked off. Demyx walked in and sat down at the table.
    “Happy B-day!†He said, before turning his attention to his Fullmetal Alchemist manga. Luxord smiled. Roxas went up to Luxord.
    “Hey Luxord, can I come to the club with you tonight?†he asked. Demyx looked up at him.
    “Roxas, it’s an over 21 club.†Demyx said. Roxas was confused.
    “What do you mean?†he asked.
    “You’re 15, which means you’re underage. You can’t go in.â€
    “Why is it an over 21 club?â€
    “I don’t know!â€
    “Well, I’m not leaving until someone tells me why it’s an over 21 club!â€
    “Fine then.†Demyx said. He summoned his Sitar. “I’ll tell you why in a sing-a-long!†He then started to strum an overly happy tune. Roxas backed away.
    “That’s ok, I don’t care that much.†Roxas said before backing slowly out of the room. Demyx dismissed his Sitar and went back to reading his manga, laughing wickedly.
    “Works every time…†he said to himself.
    +++
    Zexion was reading his spell book quietly in his room, studying his spells. Just then, Xigbar came barging into his room.
    “Hey! Zexion!†he said. Zexion rolled his eyes in annoyance.
    “Hello, Xigbar.†He closed his book and looked up at Xigbar.
    “Hey, do you want to come celebrate Luxord’s birthday with us?†Zexion raised an eyebrow at him.
    “Who’s ‘us’?â€
    “Xaldin, Luxord, and me.†Zexion shook his head.
    “No thanks.â€
    “Oh come on!†Xigbar begged. “It’ll be real fun! Besides, you’re my best friend, and I won’t have a fun time without you.†He made a pouting face. Zexion couldn’t help laughing at it.
    “Fine. I’ll go.†He said. Xigbar smiled.
    “Great! I’ll tell the guys!†He said, running out of the room. Zexion smiled and returned to reading his book.
    “Best friends…†he said.
    +++
    Xaldin, Xigbar, Luxord, and Zexion got ready to go. Xemnas walked up to them.
    “Oh no…†Xaldin said quietly to the group. “He’s got that lecture look again.†They all broke out in quiet snickers. Xemnas crossed his arms.
    “Now, I know that you all are going out to have fun,†He started, “but don’t have too much fun.†Xigbar put his hands on his hips.
    “Relax!†he said. “There’s no such thing as too much fun!â€
    “We’ll be fine.†Zexion said. Xemnas looked at them, and then at Luxord.
    “Have a nice birthday.†He said smiling.
    “Thanks, I will.†Luxord said. Then, Xemnas’ smile disappeared as he looked at the four of them again.
    “And don’t kill yourselves.†Xemnas then walked off. The four of them laughed at his lecture, opened their Corridors of Darkness, and disappeared.
    +++
    The arrived in The Real World, right in front of the club. Xigbar looked at the sign overtop the club doors.
    “The Smash club—here we are.†He said, smiling. Outside, there was a lot of noise. People were dancing, drinking, and eating. Along the street, cars were racing. The drivers they presumed to be drunk.
    “Let’s head inside!†Xaldin said, and with that the four walked up to the doors, and were let in.
    +++
    The interior of the club was louder than the exterior. People were talking loudly, drinking, eating, and dancing. The four Nobodies blended in with the Wholes perfectly. Xaldin, Xigbar, and Luxord walked over to a bar serving drinks and sat down.
    “Three sodas, please.†Luxord said to the bar tender. Xigbar looked around.
    “Where’s Zexion?†he asked. Xaldin looked around, and then sighed in annoyance.
    “Over there.†He said, pointing to a table a little ways away from them. Zexion had stationed himself at a table far away from the music and noise of the club. He was sitting there, reading his book. Xigbar rolled his eyes.
    “I’ll go get him.†He said, getting up from his seat. He walked over to where Zexion was and sat down.
    “What’re you doing?†he asked. Zexion looked up from his book.
    “Reading.†He said.
    “Come on! This is a celebration! Come hang out with us!†Xigbar said, pulling Zexion up from the table and towards the bar where the others were waiting.
    “Nice of you to join us.†Luxord said, sipping on his soda. Zexion smiled half-heartedly. He really wanted to read his book. Just then, a group of four girls came up to them. They were all blonde with brown eyes.
    “Hey.†Said one of them, smiling. The four Nobodies chorused a ‘hey’ back. The youngest girl in the group smiled.
    “You guys want to dance?†she asked. Xaldin, Xigbar, and Luxord nodded, and got up from their seats to dance with them. Zexion remained seated. The youngest one looked at him.
    “Are you coming?†Zexion shook his head. Xigbar looked at him.
    “Come on, Zexion!†he said. Zexion shook his head again.
    “You guys go ahead.†The youngest one shrugged.
    “Suit yourself.†She said, as the group of seven went off to the dance floor. Zexion, as soon as they were gone, walked back over to his spot at the table he was previously, and went back to reading his book, occasionally looking up to laugh at how ridiculous the three Nobodies looked dancing.
    +++
    Hours passed. It was getting late. Zexion looked up. The club had grown more crowded. He stood up and started to walk around the club, looking for Xaldin, Xigbar, and Luxord. After searching the entire club, he went outside to search. And surely, Xaldin and Luxord were on the other side of the road, watching the cars race up and down the street. Zexion got close to the side of the street and tried to get their attention.
    “Hey!†Xigbar said suddenly, coming from behind Zexion. He put his hand on his shoulder. “What’s up, man?†Zexion could tell he was slightly drunk by his tipsy appearance.
    “Have you been drinking?†Zexion asked. Xigbar wildly shook his head.
    “No way!†he said, standing in front of Zexion. Zexion then put a finger on Xigbar’s forehead, and pressed on it. Xigbar stumbled back, nearly falling over. Xigbar then shoved Zexion.
    “Stop pushing me!†he yelled. Zexion rolled his eyes.
    “I think we should go.†He said. He turned towards the other side of the street, where Luxord and Xaldin were standing.
    “LUXORD!†he called. “XALDIN!†They stopped and looked at him. “Let’s go! It’s getting late!â€
    “So???†Luxord called. He and Xaldin then began to laugh. Zexion sighed. They were drunk too.
    “Let’s go! NOW!!!†Zexion shouted. They laughed at him again. He then turned towards Xigbar. “Help me out here!†Xigbar again shook his head wildly.
    “No way! I’m having fun!†he shouted, as two cars whizzed past. He clapped for them. “YAY GO RED CAR!!!!†Zexion put his hand over his face.
    “Oh boy…†he said. He looked up at Xigbar. “We’re leaving RIGHT now.†Zexion then grabbed his wrist and started to pull him away from the street. Xigbar pulled away.
    “NO!†he yelled.
    “YES!!†Zexion yelled back. Xigbar shoved him.
    “I said NO!!!†He shoved Zexion again. This time, a little bit into the street. Zexion shoved back.
    “You’re DRUNK!!!†he shouted. Xigbar shoved Zexion harder.
    “GO DIE!!!†He yelled. He shoved Zexion even harder. Zexion this time stumbled back into the street. He gave Xigbar an angry look.
    “We’re going back home NOW!†He shouted. Xigbar glared at him evilly.
    “DROP DEAD!!!!†He yelled. He went up to Zexion and shoved him—HARD. Zexion went stumbling into the middle of the street. He was about to yell at Xigbar when all of the sudden he heard someone yelling at him. Zexion looked up to see a bright flash of white.

    Then, something large smashed into him.

    Zexion remembered flying, and then he hit another something hard. It was flat, and smelled of dirt. He was in a lot of pain. It was like som had crushed him. He felt like Roxas’ Keyblades had whacked him for a week straight. Suddenly, the pain left.

    “Zexion! Zexion!â€

    Someone was calling for him?

    He felt light headed.

    Whatever he was laying on felt really cold.

    “Zexion!â€

    He was pretty sure someone was calling for him.

    He felt cold all over.

    Something picked up his wrist.

    “He has no pulse!â€

    Xigbar?

    “Zexion! Don’t die!!â€

    He felt really cold now.

    “Zexion!!!â€

    Who was that?

    Everything was black.

    He felt numb.

    “ZEXION!!!â€

    Zexion?

    Who…was that?

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    *reads poll*

    Someone hates it? Why? *feels bad*
     
  2. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    YAY, great job!

    Nice suspence!

    It's funny yet sad so far. Okay the end is very sad but great *gives thumbs up* :D :)

    FIRST POST!
     
  3. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Thanks :) :D
     
  4. Shade Tail Hollow Bastion Committee

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    NOOOOO!! don't die Zex!
    Great fan-fic, looking forward to readin the next one:D
     
  5. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    ONce again, you attempted to kill him....oh well I luv it!!!

    "YAY Go Red Car!!!!" I luved that part...that was funny....I luv the story!!! Continue!! *waits*
     
  6. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    :D Thanks! *gets to work on chapter 2*

    thanks! I love picking on my favorite members in the organization, like zexion, axel, and roxas :)
     
  7. Sanda Kingdom Keeper

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    Its cute ^^
     
  8. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    wow *claps* i want to read more!
     
  9. deadaim2thegrave Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Don't Worry about those people who say they hated it. they probably did cause they thought it was funny or something. N E ways good job.keep up the good work.I'm guessing u have a knack for trying to kill zexion a lot.:eek:
     
  10. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    yeah, i like picking on the members alot. i dunno why, but zexion is especially fun to pick on :)

    And thank you! all of you! :D
     
  11. Yuffieone Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Cough don't worry about the people who said that, there just extreamly jelouse... Shifts uneasily in chair....

    Acctually this time I did vote for it >.<
     
  12. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    :D I'm glad you like it
     
  13. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Yay, im so glad the one i really wanted got picked, cant wait for the next part, oooooooooooooooo the suspence

    Another great start to a great story :D
     
  14. riku-josh07 Destiny Islands Resident

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    That part about the red car was hilarious!

    This is the second time Zexion nearly dies! (third if you count that incident with Larxene)

    Great story!! Very i-i-i-i-i-intersting. . .
     
  15. twilit_shadow King's Apprentice

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    Oh my gosh! Zexion's dying or dead!!!!

    Very creepy. But with the added funnyness of three Organization members getting drunk in a nightclub (I couldn't help thinking about that in my head. lol). Very, very well done. I look forward to the next part!
     
  16. Fruity~ Hollow Bastion Committee

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    its nice. Hope you continue till many chapters. :)
     
  17. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Thank you all! *takes bow and falls out of computer chair*


    OWWWW...*mumbles something bad about gravity*

    I liked the red car part too :)
     
  18. 2Foxxie4U ~The Forgotten Crusader...~

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    Incase you haven't noticed, there's someone who votes they don't like it on EVERY story. >.> Don't let it get to you. KEEP IT UP! =3

    *read chap. 2*
     
  19. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Thanks for that :)
     
  20. IWuvshZexion Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Why did you make the story ending so sad makes me want to cry:(
     
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