Me to You

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Tell me
Show me
Prove me wrong and I will say
“Hold me
Love me
Can you ever forgive me baby?â€

So you said you couldn’t stay?
Can you at least tell me where you’re goin’?
Will you make me feel okay?
I just can’t stop these tears from flowin’

Tell me
Show me
Prove me wrong and I will say
“Hold me
Love me
Can you ever forgive me baby?â€

As I look out my window
I see the flashes of war
Had these wounds not made me slow
I would fight with you like before

Tell me
Show me
Prove me wrong and I will say
“Hold me
Love me
Can you ever forgive me baby?â€

And when I see you comin’ home
I’d wrap my arms around you
You’d tell me this whole time you’d known
This is exactly what I’d do

So tell me
Show me
Prove me wrong and I will say
“Hold me
Love me
Can you ever forgive me baby?â€

Cuz I forgive you baby
And no matter what comes our way
I will love you
To the end of my days

*I've been writing songs for as long as I can remember. I hope you enjoyed that one. I wrote it Sep. 27, 2007*

 

touching poem / song, it has a very strong sense of circulation and closure, very good.

 

The lyrics for it are great. Does it have any sort of melody on music or just in your head? If you could post a video of you actually singing it or at least post the notes for it or a recording that would be really cool. Good Job.
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Wow, that's good...you really ought to write more...this was amazing~! :)

 

Very good poem/song I should say.

 

Yeah, O R A N G E, I've got a melody for it. My sister plays the flute along with it when I sing. I wish I could post a video, but our video camera doesn't hook up to the computer. I've got lots more songs that I might post too. The only thing I'm worried about it someone taking it as their own. And thanks, Nymph.

 

If they did, they wouldn't be able to get the melody right and it wouldn't sound good anyway. And that sucks that your camera doesn't work. =[
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Good length.....good rhyme.....good atmosphere......good poem/song.....like how its both....keep up the good work.....