Me in the Organization Chp.1

Well this is the first Chapter.And it's short so enjoy.





I was in the island...just standing there..clueless for a moment.
Then a mad in a black coat comes up to me.
"You are a Nobody."
I didn't say a word but just stood there,with my
mind a complete blank.
"Noemy...hmmmm"
He puts his name in my face and adds and x.
Then he scrambles it,until it stops.
"Mexony..will be your name."
He hands me a black coat.
"Put it on when we arrive..you are the new member of organization
13 now changed to 14."
I slowly nodded.
Trying to catch the mans words.
"Xemnas is my name."
"X-..Xe..Xemn..Xemnas."
He nodds.
"Come..follow me."
He then opens a big black tunnel.
"Through the Corridor of Darkness we shall
go through."
He puts his hand behind my back pushing it to walk.
Boy i was slow.
I couldn't feel anything.
My legs felt miserable.
As we walked in.
It was pitched black.
I didn't mind..even though
i was scared of the dark.


So quickly we arrived inside a humongous castle.
All white and grey also black.
I felt like...weird.
He then leads me to a door.
"Go in..put the black coat on...and your new life..will begin."
I nodded and went it the door.
After the door shut behind me.


Thats the first chapter like my name?lol
Mexony:Dso proud next chapter will come out when i ever have time.:)

 

I thought it was good. It is choppy at points, and you need more detail in the story and more emotions. But other than that it was good. Ill be sure to read the next chapter when it comes out.

Man i got to stop posting on other peoples stories and start working on mine.:D

 

That was great! *is wondering whats gonna happen in the next chapter*

Same here, lol

 

Me in the Organization Chp.2

Well here it is.:D



I was in my room putting on the black coat..that
xe..xemn. xemnas gave me.
When i putted the black coat on i then zipped
up the zipper.
I could hear that annoying noise of the zipper.
When it was fully on,i felt like a new me.
A new member of the Organization.
I then saw the knob opening i stood still with
my fist closed.
When the door was pushed open,I saw this
teenager with blonde hair and blue eyes.
"Oh..sorry wrong room..Xemnas said there was a new me-"
He stared at me.
A Female in the Organization.
What?He hasn't seen a female in the organization?
"So your the new member?"
I nodded.
ofcourse i am.
He walked up to me and holded my hand
shaking it.
"Names Roxas."
He's still shaking my hand.
I smiled at him and then took his hand
of my hand.
"Your Name?"
Right before i was going to say my new name,
I couldn't say a word.
So i took my book from the shelf.
And wrote down my name.
No-em-y.
No wait..thats my 'true' name
The new name is...
Mex-ony.
After i wrote it down i showed it Roxas smiling.
He looked at the words trying to read it.
"Oh.."He said suprisingly.
"Um hey..Mexony you wanna go meet the other members?"
I nodded my head.
I was wondering..what will they think of me?
Will they like me?

~Living Room~

As we entered the living room Roxas called to the organization,
to get his attention.
They all turned around.
"Everyone this is Mexony,number 14."
I waved and smiled to them.
No one smiled but stared at me.
Then this girl with blonde hair came up to me and walked around me.
"New Female..member.."
I rolled my eyes.
What she hasnt seen a female too?And she's a female.
"Hey Mexony...welcome to the girls club."
I cocked my head in confusion.
Girls Club?
There was a girls club?
Then i heard a deep voice mumbling.
"Xaldin!Can you stop you counting!?"
Xaldin was his name?Nice name for a guy...like...er...him?
"Well EXCUSE me Larxene!"
I can see me and Larxene will be friends.
But will the other be my friends.
Can't say that they're alergic to girls.
Then after i put my hood on.
So then no one can look at me.
I then turned around and started walking looking down at the ground.
Until i bumped into some dude.
"WOAH!"
I can hear ratteling from a glass plate.
*SMASH*
Whoops..better help.
I bended down,helping pick up the cups.
"S-s-sorry."
"Gah...well Larxene be careful next time you big duphus!"
"Ahem..."
The Boy looked up and saw Larxene tapping her feet.
"She's not a duphus..ok Xigbar?"
Xigbar was his name.
SO instead of helping him..and threw the cups at him and
walked out the living room.
Wow what an Organization!
"Xibgar your hurt her feelings!"
He snorted in a pathetic way.
"Her feelings!?Ohplease!"
"It's True."
They all turned around and saw Xemnas crossing his arms.
"Oh..Xemnas.."
Xemnas was standing,leaning on the wall in the shade.
"Go..Go apologize to the New Member."
Xigbar sighed in annoyance.
"Fine.."
He got up and walked out the living room.
"That's a good pirate."
He stopped.
"I'm not a pirate..stop calling me that!"
Then he kept walking.

~Mexony's Room~

Xigbar then pushed open the door.
"Hey...Mexony."
I ignored him.
What an Organization.
He sat down beside me.

Thats all for now.
Sorry for the short story.
And hoped you liked this chapter T_T

 

once again, great story. I'm liking this so far (even though it's only been 2 chapters)

What does Mexony look like? I'll try to draw her for you

 

Me In the Organization Chp.3

Here's Chapter 3
Enjoy:D



As Xigbar sat down beside me i put my hood on.
For him not to see me...depressed.
Oh..You may not know how i look like.
Well...I have the same skintone as Xemnas,Browneyes.
Wavy hair up to my shoulders,an earring that has the letter N on it.
im almost the same size as Zexion only alittle shorter.
That's all i can say.

Anyways Xigbar looked under and tried to see me face.
I smiled under the hood..the way he looked like was foolish.
"I know your smiling Mexony."
I put my hand over my mouth,trying not to laugh.
"Aha!Your laughing..what is it because of the way i look right now?"
I nodded giggling.
I then took my hand off over my mouth,and took my hood off.
"Apology accepted."
He looked at me in confusion.
What?He didn't know that i knew that he was going to say sorry?
"Um..how'd you...well..nevermind...anyways wanna go
to the living room and talk with the others?"
I thought for a moment,looking out the window.
"No..I'll think i'll just hang here for a while."
Xigbar nodded at me and left the room closing the door.
I was all alone.
I layed down on my bed looking up at the cieling.
"Wish i had a heart....It's so...so different without
a heart."
I sighed.
I then yawned in getting ready to take a nap.
My eyes were closing..closing...and gone.

~Dream~

"Hey!Noemy come'on quit being shy and come play!"
The young girl shook her head.
"Oh please...you can't just stay there sitting on the bench.
You gotta let out alittle!"
I look up.
"Only once and im back to where i was."
The other girl nodded and took my hand.

*poke*

wha??what?
~End Dream~

I opened my eyes quick.
when i was opened wide i saw Roxas infront of me.
"Sorry..i came here to tell you it's time for dinner."
I shook my head smiling.
"I'm not hungry."
Roxas nodded and ran out my room,closing the door.
Ugh...why did he have to come at this time!?
I was in the middle of my dream.
Well..no blames for him.

I sat up on my bed looking at the door.
"What were they serving anyways?"
I said to myself.
"KFC."
I looked up and saw Larxene.
"Hi."
She walked up to me and sat down beside me.
I heard her taking out a piece of crumbled paper.
"Let's see...."
I leaned over to see.
It said female organization.
Only my name and hers.
I frowned,and so did Larxene.
"So sad...from years i was in the Oraganization i was
the only female org.member."
I frowned even more.
Man how can she live with them for years.
Must had a a rough life.
"Ya'know...i've been wanting to know..how old
are you?"
I laughed alittle in embaressment.
"I'm 13."
She raised an eyebrow at me.
What she doesn't believe me?
"Oh...i was expecting you the same age as Roxas."
She laughed and so did I.
Even though it wasn't that funny and all...
"Let's go to the basement i wanna show you something."
I nodded and got up.


~Basement~

As we arrived it was all cold in there.
I had goosebumps..i hate that.
She walked up to a shelf.
and blew to get the dust off.
I watched her grab a dark red book.
She walked to me and standed beside me.
"This is my book...a diary you can call.....i talk about my life..
years ago when i was little..And now in the Organization.
I nodded.
Larxene passed me the book to look at.
"Anytime..you can read it...but.. you cannot let the others read it.
Promise?If your my friend you should say promise."
She gave me a pouty face.
She's asking me to be her friend.
"I promise,Larxene...i won't let anyone see this."
She smiled at me.
Also i did to.
A friendship.
First request is to promise...


Thats Chapter 3 hoped you liked it Chapter 4 will come
out...dunno..

 

Yay! Mexony and Larxene are friends! :D :D
Wonder what's written in Larxy's diary... *tries to look over Mexony's shoulders*

 

Me in the Organization Chp.4

Here it is:D





I was walking through the hall way,hearing all these words...
the voice of Larxene.
"Promise..promise."
That's all i heard.
I take that Larxene was really serious.
I promise is a promise.
Then after i ran into Roxas.
"Hey.."
"Hi,where you going?"
I cocked my head.
Why was he asking where i was going?Ohwell.
"I was heading to the kitchen to grab a snack."
Roxas put his head down and looked back up.
"Can i...come?"
I nodded my head and after walked with Roxas to the kitchen.
As we were walking Larxene popped out.
"Roxas.....Mexony.."
Roxas waved and i smiled.
We kept on walking.
Then we passed by Xemnas who was on the wall leaning.
"stop right there...Roxas you can keep on walking...Mexony...stay."
Roxas waved at me,and i smiled.
I watched him keep on walking.
Then after I looked straight at Xemas.
"Yes?"
He sighed and stood up straight.
"What's with you..and Larxene."
There it shocked me...must think of and excuse.
"Nothing...why ask?"
He looked straight in my eyes..evil eyes....
"Your hiding something..spill it out."
I started to heat up,my fist's were closing tight.
"I said nothing!"
Xemnas grinned at my and then put his hand on my shoulder.
"You don't talk to your superior like that!"
I shoved his hand away from my shoulder.
"Sorry but,,when i say nothing!I mean nothing's going on!"
Xemnas took out his red lasers.
I can see him staring at me..waiting for a complete answer.
A tear went down my face...feeling that..this will be bad.
"Don't start crying Mexony...I'll let you go unless you tell me
whats going on?"
I shooked my head.
I ran down the halls, heading for the door(to the outside)
What is he doing...no wait...what am i doing?
so i just quit the organization..just like that!?
After i tripped over a crack on the ground.
My foot was stuck.
No one...
there to help me.
Just me
all alone.
I was struggeling to get my foot out.
But then i heard a craxk coming from my ankle.
"OW!!!"
I screamed painfully.
I then saw Heartless surrounding me.
I'm doomed...
Though i took out my weapon no one else uses...(well i think no org.member uses).
My fist.
"Come take on me heartless!I can't die!"
No member can die!
Well i think..can they really die?
The Heartless jumped on me.
I kept punching them with my fist..which was usefull.
More and More came swarming around.
I was beginning to get weaker by the minute.
My fist got tired and it was beginning to get numb.
Then after the heartless jumped on me.
But before a lightning came and struck all the heartless.
I looked up and saw Larxene standing there with her finger pointing up,
to the dark clouds.
"Mexony!"
"Larxene Help!!!!"
She came running towards me,until i could see Xemnas standing on the building.
I gasped.
As Larxene was running.
I punched the ground hard,causing Larxene to fall.
My foot was released.
"Larxene...sorry."
I went on limping,to the castle.
She got up,putting her finger on her lip.
''Whats with her?!"
Larxene got up.
"Larxene,sorry!?NO..wait....
she DID tell!She should be running but once i catch up,shes gone.
I trusted her!That fool!"
She then teleported,,to search on for Mexony.
"Whew..."
I stopped running and sat down on the steps,outside.
"Mexony...what was that all about?"
I looked up.
It was Xemnas.
"Nothing!"
He grinned at me.
"Nothing?Then..why was Larxene trying to help you...and you refused
to take that."
I tightened my teeth together.
"Bit of a softie at that time,don't you think Mexony?"
I shooked my head.
"Larxene's always like that!"
Xemnas shooked his head and nealed down to me.
"Don't you see Mexony? The way you see Larxene isn't that..she's
a whole lot...different."
I widened my eyes.
A whole lot different?
"She doesn't act like that Mexony...If you once catch her,without her knowing
your there...you'll see the real her!"
Xemnas opened the corridor of darkness and left.
Leaving me all alone.
"Wait!"
I got up and walked to the castle.
I went down the basement...
I think it was time for me to take a look in that book.
Larxene's Diary.
I opened it.

~Larxene's Diary~

Ever since I was a little kid, my life was rough..i was taught to be mean...
i've been a "softie" ever since.
My sister...she was the one who told me,too stop....
Act brave,stop crying, quit the softness.
And so i listened.
Days,by time,by week,by minutes,by year.
I learned.
I became more meaner,more greedy.
I was becoming a girl..a whole lot different girl.
I hated everything.
Everything...is true..and i always will.
Have I told you....My big sister was mean?
She was rude all the time,u always round up in her battles.
And end up hurt.

I had such a strong heart.
This big Heartless..is what you call...when i was only 13...
The world changed...keyblades..enemies...heartlesses.
I was running a heartless grabbed me tight squeezing me.
Almost like choking... on food.
I was suffering.
Then I pasted away.
I fell into a deep dark black place.
It was pitch dark.
.........I believe it was Darkness.
Am i still alive?
Well you see me here..im alive...no heart though...really sad.
Never to be me again.
But i have to wait..We need kingdom hearts..to exist fully
and completely.
I can't wait.
One day...just one day...i'll round up Heartless and the times.
Heartless are deafeated...hearts go to kingdom hearts.
It grows...
But now.......

~End of Larxene's Diary ~

I closed the book.
on the back of the book..there was a picture....
of Larxene...when she was young.
She looked like an Angel...a girl...
who was never "The" Larxene now.


I then heard the door slammed open.
It was loud...the lights shutted off.
Whos...there?


That's Chapter 4!
Did you like it?
Chapter 5 comes out...dunno...in another day..:)?
Hopefully you liked it!:D

 

Me in the Organization Chp.5

This is chapter 5.:D



As the lights were turned off.
I holded tight to the Larxene's diary.
Then i heard footsteps coming closer.
*Bang*
I was pressed down to the ground.
I banged my chin,though i was still holding onto the diary.
"What the?Whos where!?"
I then got punched on the face, to past me out.
But that didn't happen.
I tried to dodge the attacks but, the attacks come every second,
and i don't have time to dodge them.
Then i was getting weaker.
I was losing hold of the book, but i tried
to hold it tight.
Then i heard footsteps getting really close.
No more attacks...
Then a kick went in my face.
I have pasted out for minutes.

~Dream~

"What do you members want!?"
Mexony yelled.
The Members laughed.
"Your Heart."
Mexony got up and closed her fist tight,getting
ready to attack the whole org.members.
"Make sense!"
They all laughed again.
Mexony didn't see anything funny.
"You see well...You have a heart inside you,
you fully exist...we were just using you.
So if you try to run now...hehe..well you can't run..because
your surround....BY US!"
Mexony gasped and looked around.
The Members surrounding her.
"Mexony..i trusted you..and now..i cannot
forgive you!"
Mexony knew it was Larxene.
"Lets end this charade!"
"Yeah!"
The members said.
They charged after Mexony.
Mexony started to run.
"Go away!"
"We can't...not unless we get your heart first!"
Mexony opened wide her eyes and turned around, causing her eyes
going red.
"Fine..."
She then charged after the Members, attacking each and every one
of them.
Half died.
And there was two left.
Xemnas and Larxene.
She looked at the two of them trying
to find their weak spot.
"Bye."
They disappeared.
Mexony smiled, then she stopped.
Was it safe?
*SHANG*

~End Dream~

"NOOOOOa..huh?"
I looked around the room.
I was tied up to a chair.
My legs were tied up.
I tried to struggel out of it, but it wouldn't work.
"Only one left thing to do.....HELP!!!"
I kept on yelling help until someone comes and un-ties me.
After 10 minutes.
Roxas, Xigbar, Zexion, Axel and Saix came running in.
"Mexony!"
"Help me...and un tie me also!"
They all gathered around me and start un tieing the rope.
"Thanks guys."
"No problem." Roxas said.
I smiled and struggled my feet.

After the rope was all off, I was able to stand.
I took a deep breath and looked at all of them.



Thats it Chapter 6 will be up in next day!Sorry if this was short.:(
:):D Chapter 6 tomorrow!

 

Me in the Organization Chp.6

Here it is dun dun dunnnnn



I looked at everyone.
They all stared at my face.
I don't know why.
"What?"
Xigbar took a few steps closer to me.
"Who did this?"
I shrugged and shooked my head, frowning.
"I'm not sure...it was all pitch dark."
Roxas walked to me and put his hand on my shoulder.
"Ow!"
i pushed his hand away from my shoulder.
Axel looked away and then crossed his arms.
"Did you scent who it was?"
Scent?
I can't scent.
"No.."
"Mexony...you coat...half is ripped."
I looked over at my left arm.
Half of it was ripped off.
A nice black coat/robe all ruined.
I looked to the ground.
Trying to hide.
"I bet Xemnas did this.."
I mumbled to myself.
I looked up and frowned to all of them.
"Huh?"
I looked at Saix who was confused.
"Xemas did this guys..."
Zexion raised his eyebrow and crossed his arms.
"How could Xemnas do this? He was in the
living room watching t.v"
I tried to think.
"Of course....Larxene did this...She trusted me....and-"
"Larxene?What does this have to do with Larxene?"
I shooked my head, and ran out the basement.

~Outside the Castle~

As I was running I noticed...the Diary...Larxene's Diary...not in my hands.
"Oh no...Someone stole Larxene's Diary....I'm doomed."
"Yeh it's stolen..."
I quickly turned around and saw Larxene leaning on the ground.
"You lied to me..Mexony.."
I shooked my head and gritted my teeth together.
"No i didn't!"
She laughed alittle..evily.
"Like i trust you now! You lied...and-"
I looked at Larxene's hand she had her diary in her hands.
"You...you were the one who attacked me."
She nodded.
"You told one of the members.And now that you told...
your finished."
I crunched up my fists together and punched the ground hard.
"wha!"
Larxene fell down.
Then it came to me.
What Xemnas said to me...

~Flash Back~

I stopped running and sat down on the steps,outside.
"Mexony...what was that all about?"
I looked up.
It was Xemnas.
"Nothing!"
He grinned at me.
"Nothing?Then..why was Larxene trying to help you...and you refused
to take that."
I tightened my teeth together.
"Bit of a softie at that time,don't you think Mexony?"
I shooked my head.
"Larxene's always like that!"
Xemnas shooked his head and nealed down to me.
"Don't you see Mexony? The way you see Larxene isn't that..she's
a whole lot...different."

~End Flash back~

That's what Xemnas meant...Larxenes a whole lot different.
"She doesn't act like that ...If you once catch her,without her knowing
your there...you'll see the real her!"
Larxene sat up and stared at me.
"Huh???Real who?"
I looked at her straight in the eye.
"You"I said pointing at her directly.
She grinned.
"Who told you that!?"
I chuckled.
"Like you should know! Infact you should know!"
Larxene raised her eye brow.
"Me?I told you that!?"
I shooked my head in disapointment.
"Larxene, Larxene..every member here in the organization
knows that's the real you..and so do I!!!"
She got up and quickly stepped forward.
"That's the real me now Mexony...but before i was wayyyy different."
I crossed my arms, and stomped the ground hard, causing her to fall.
"Then why aren't you acting like you were before now!?"
She frowned and lied there playing with her fingers.
"Never given a chance."
I cocked my head and sat down...to listen.
"Never...given and chance?"
She nodded.
"When you turn to a nobody..they don't give you a choice...I wasn't
given a choice in my REAL life...i was forced to give in the darkness."
I nodded and then got up.
"Not a choice in your normal choice...and not a choice in now."
She nodded.
I looked at her..looking at that wet tear drop down.
I walked up to her.
I should stop...and so should she.
I lend my hand out and she looked up at me.
"Can we stop fighting?"
You stood there frozen for a minute.Then she went suprised after.
"Your...giving me a choice?"
I nodded.
"Yeh..it's your choice..whether we should stop fighting,
or keep on going."
She took my hand and got up.
"I want to stop fighting...but...did you really tell anyone
about the diary thingy?"
I opened my eyes wide.
"No.I didn't tell anyone but...-"
"But what!?"
Was she getting angry at me?
I sighed.
"Xemnas...knows theres something going on between us."
She widened her eyes.
"Huh?How?"
"Well..."


~14 minutes later~

"So..."
I nodded.
"We should tell Xemnas whats going on...before he get's in on us
deeper."
Larxene shooked her head fast.
"Nooo..."
I nodded.
"We need to tell..you were the only female in the organization
until i came after Roxas....you got all different when i came..you act nice
like the past."
Larxene nodded.
"'Bout time there was a female in the organization..I wasn't used to
the guys...all mean..except for Demyx..he was always cheerful...yeh..
your right..we should go tell."
I nodded.
She then opened the corridor of darkness, and we both
walked in together..getting ready to tell Xemnas.


Like it?Chapter 7 is up..in a few minutes.
The last chapter is chp.7
yes i know short.
*smashes tomatoe on head*:)

 

Me in the Organization Last chapter.

Here it is.




As me and Larxene were walking down through the halls.
We saw Xemnas standing right in the middle of the hall.
"Girls..."
"Xemnas..."
I said.
Larxene sighed.
"I need to tell you something."
"I know."
Larxene crossed her arms and turned to me.
I jumped quickly.
I thought she was going to hit me.
"You already told!?"
Xemnas cutted through putting his hand
between me and Larxene.
"No she didn't tell...I kinda figured-"
Xemnas grabbed the book from Larxene's hand.
"Hey!Give that Back!Your not aloud to...oh what the hec...
when you find out..im gonna be a laughing stock."
Xemnas opened the book.

~Larxenes Diary~


Ever since I was a little kid, my life was rough..i was taught to be mean...
i've been a "softie" ever since.
My sister...she was the one who told me,too stop....
Act brave,stop crying, quit the softness.
And so i listened.
Days,by time,by week,by minutes,by year.
I learned.
I became more meaner,more greedy.
I was becoming a girl..a whole lot different girl.
I hated everything.
Everything...is true..and i always will.
Have I told you....My big sister was mean?
She was rude all the time,u always round up in her battles.
And end up hurt.

I had such a strong heart.
This big Heartless..is what you call...when i was only 13...
The world changed...keyblades..enemies...heartlesses.
I was running a heartless grabbed me tight squeezing me.
Almost like choking... on food.
I was suffering.
Then I pasted away.
I fell into a deep dark black place.
It was pitch dark.
.........I believe it was Darkness.
Am i still alive?
Well you see me here..im alive...no heart though...really sad.
Never to be me again.
But i have to wait..We need kingdom hearts..to exist fully
and completely.
I can't wait.
One day...just one day...i'll round up Heartless and the times.
Heartless are deafeated...hearts go to kingdom hearts.
It grows...
But now.......

*flips page*

Im going good in the organization.
Im hoping and Dreaming.
One day i will exist having a heart...i feel like Axel and Roxas.
I kinda went through Axel's room and found a book...
I read it...He said when he's around Roxas
He feels like he exist..having a heart.
Goes the samething for me.
When Mexony arrived.
I felt like i had a heart.
Kinda strange.
This may be true.
Although we don't have hearts..they don't beat.
We do have hearts...we just can't feel them or hear them.
I'd be a whole new me when i have a heart.

*flips page*

Never noone shall look at this...only me and Mexony
can look in this.
SO CLOSE THE BOOK NOW!!!

~End Diary~
Xemnas closed the book fast.
"True..we don't have hearts...i'm not sure if you guys are exactly right.
You don't have hearts yet...you feel like yu have a heart when your around
Mexony...as Axel and Roxas."
Me and Larxene both nodded.
He put his two hands of Larxene's and my shoulder.
"I'll keep secret.."
Larxene grinned.
"Better...i don't want the others finding out."
Xemnas did something he never usually does..smiled...
He smiled and nodded.
We all smiled.



Good?I think so...
If you don't know other story coming.
It' gonna we a switch with the Organization 14! :D:D:D:D:D

 

Your story was nice! :D I liked it! Very interesting

 

Thanks:D:D:D

 

=) pretty good, but it seemed like you were skipping lines to make the story seem longer.

Also, there were many spelling mistakes, and you only need one punctuation mark at the end of each sentence.