Digital Art May Sig...

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Moodkip, Nov 5, 2007.

  1. Moodkip ~洞爺湖~

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    Any Good?

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  2. Anderson (☞゚∀゚)☞ You've lost the game.

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    ...you need to seriously tell me where you get your renders...XD

    Gradient map, plz. Perhaps a Purple/Orange one. Lol, you seriously need to work on the text. The beaming lights are overtaking the sig D: Get rid of the ones on the very left. Add some white negative space on the lower left and higher right to create some better flow. The splatters stick out a bit much and are pretty much distributed through the whole sig. Try to keep them more closer to the focal and blur some of it and sharpen the rest.

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  3. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Mmm.. The background doesn´t follow the flow of the render, but for some reason I like that, too, maybe put a central light source.
     
  4. Misty gimme kiss

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    fix the text & add Gradient Maps plzkthnx.

    Yeah, aside from the colors, I like it, but erase some of the flow-y white lines. Make the text a clipping mask; that always works for me.
     
  5. AlexisNobodyXV Destiny Islands Resident

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    To me she looks a little boxed in. No offense. But I really like it. ^^
     
  6. Master of the Onyx Flame Hollow Bastion Committee

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    the only problems i have with it are that i dont like those colors but that's not important.
    and the wierd little colors at the bottom right, those shouldn't be there.
     
  7. Roxas is Hot I'd lick his Sea Salt stick anytime. ♥

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    How do you do ittttititit?!?!?! :bored:


    But yeah, a gradient wouldn't look too shabby-dabby. Overall, nothing's bad with it. 10.
     
  8. Cody Chaser

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    You really need to work on mixing effects and flow.
    Cause, you have these paint dab things, then, you have these bright streaks, and they don't work together, or even alone, at all imo.
    And you do have flow. but your stock ruins it.
    This belongs in a smoother, moving, vector like sig. It's just sitting there. Randomly sitting there.
    and your lighting isn't doing well either.
    Anyways, I think i'm done now.