May I be...

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  1. Last of the Organization Twilight Town Denizen

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    Interesting question to ask,
    however not quite finished of course,
    but tell me,
    what would you place as the final source.

    There can be many answers,
    all with different effect,
    however since its my question,
    it may not be what you expect.

    You seem so sad,
    something seems troubling,
    I wish I knew what it was,
    that made this problem keep bubbling.

    I wish I could be there for you,
    trying to fix whatever hinders,
    what it is that prevents your smile,
    that is what I wish I could do.

    I extend my hand,
    giving a soft, small, gentle, smile,
    hopefully something I am able to do,
    atleast can make you a little grand.

    Putting that smile of yours back on for a short time,
    maybe a soft laugh or two,
    knowing that I could help some,
    instead of just playing the part of a mime.

    Whether its talking,
    or just being there to listen,
    whatever way may help you,
    get rid of the pain in your head or heart stalking.

    The offer will always be open,
    the door shall never be closed, or the doorknob bend,
    I shall try to always be here for you,
    as a kind and caring friend.
     
  2. Maka Albarn It's called love

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    Awwww! That's a really sweet poem. Kind of how I feel about others too... nice job on it. :D
     
  3. The Fifth Element Traverse Town Homebody

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    ^ agreed. I really enjoy this poem and the classic use of rhyming
     
  4. sinister King's Apprentice

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    well done!
    you have a good talent for this...