Here: the real version is on page 2, this was a first draft.. If you wish to use it then please give rep. ~Clawtooth
Wow! Its...a...little...great. Dude Marluxia is a character that uses vivids colors! Put Marly in another background! The flowers are great but it needs more vivids colors! Short words: The avvy is bad, Marly is a vivid colors character and get a better background. Im a Marly fan so I know there is to know about Marly. ^^Rose^^ Cold wasn't I?
The avvy looks pretty bad, I must say =X And i hope i don't come off as cruel... You need a better background. Bad. What did you use (program)? And better text as well. Marluxia is far too dark... Marluxia's Rose is right, you need brighter colors for him. And as for rep points, I'm not quite sure you are allowed to say that =X i'll have to check up on that. EDIT: forgot one thing. It's far too big to use as an avatar. Sorry to be slightly harsh.
I need to resize it. I used Adobe Photoshop 7. How do you mean better text? and is there anything you actually like. I don't like flaming I made it myself and I have never made anything before.
<_____________> I did warn you XD Anyways, I do like the general scheme of it. I just think it could be better in certain aspects. And by better text, I mean basically fancier/less plain text. Marluxia is more exciting than the font suggests. And i'm sorry again for being harsh... Sorry, I can't help you if you use Photoshop...I use GIMP. XD
Heheheheheh...*Sweatdrop* I really dont like this one >_< It doesnt flow, its sorta blank, its boring, the colors go horribley together, text should stand out more, marly should stand out more. I just all around dont like it >_< Try some effects to cover in the blank spaces. And change the color so that its more pinkish not a volcano red <___> Work on it :/ *Hope she didnt come off sounding terriblely *****y in that post*
Erm... they request it, not demand... you said that if they wanted it, they had to buy it using rep... *shuts up due to not wanting to be extremely rude*
o.k. I will make this plain. I DID NOT MAKE THE THREAD. It was my brother. He is never on and doen't know propper etiquete. If I had made the thread I would not have demanded. I updated it to include your fla- I mean comments. @Rosey: Point noted ^^;; a slight could change has ben made @Arcantress: Due to the fact that I was forced off the computer by my f***ing annoying brother, HE was the one that posted that ^^;; I have reprimanded him properly now XD
XD This somehow made me laugh a little. You should be more careful with your account, worse things could have happened if someone else has logged in under your name. Back to the av: You DO NOT want such a sharp airbrush line behind the text. Trust me on this. You'll want to completly remove that. But it is good to experiment with the tools available - nothing will become perfect during the first tries, remember that. As an avatar you can add some more effects to make it more exciting, but as a background for like example a PlayStationPortable it is calm and doesn't steal the attention from the menu setup. The trick is to recognize which elements are good for an avatar and which won't make it nearly as good as it can be. I'd study techniques others may have used for their avs, it never kills to have the extra knowledge.
Still looks horrible to me. Let me put it in words u can understand. MARLUXIA IS A FLOWER-THEMED CHARACTER!!! HE USES VIVID COLORS! LIKE PINK AND PURPLE!!!! PLEASE USE NORMAL COLORS!!! DON'T CLEAR THEM!!! I hope u understood. ^^Rose^^
Dude, chill the freak out. We weren't flaming you. Better. I like the font. But it still needs to be brighter ^_^;; The pink is too...pastel-ey. It needs to be between your current color and hot pink-ish. And I don't know how Photoshop works, but if there are brushes you can use, use them. Try a tuturial if it's your first time. Okay, tell your f***ing annoying brother I said that he should be more careful next time about what he does.
This is clawtooth's Brother. Your point has been noted, but as his brother, I can't really stop annoying him unfortunately. Brother and all, we were born to annoy other people. clawtooth35: In responce to your comments, sorry bout the colour scheme, I'll try something different next time, but I'm not gonna change it tonight, gotta go sleep, cos it's a school night -__- EDIT I did a new one copmletely from sctatch. It needs re-sizing but I hope it meets your expectations. Xemnas 1: Xemnas 2: Xigbar (I like the way this one turned out. Xaldin: Vexen: Lexaeus: Zexion: Saix (it should have an umlaut but my wireless keyboard with the number pad isn't working) Axel: Demyx: Luxord: Malrluxia: Larxene Roxas
