This is a story that I thought about for a long time and now it is here.It will continue if I get good comments.Ok?Let's begin!;) ~Proluge~ It was a beautiful day on Destiny Islands.The sun was shinning down on the bright blue ocean as Sora,Riku,and Kairi sat on the island.They have had many adventures in the past,but nothing could prepare them for what is going to happen soon. Chapter 1:The Adventure Begins Sora was resting on the tree with Riku and Kairi.The gang was silent until Sora spoke out. "I'm bored", said Sora. No one replied to Sora's comment,so Sora sighed.Sora was hoping that he will have another adventure soon. At night time,Sora is resting in his bed,Riku is watching TV,and Kairi is asleep.Riku is caught up in the show. "Go get him Mario",said Riku,watching a Mario Bros. Show. "What show is that",asked Sora. "The new Mario Bros Show",Riku said. "Can I watch",asked Sora. "Sure",Riku replied. Sora got out of bed to watch the show with Riku. Suddenly,the power goes out.Sora and Riku get sad faces because of this and go to their beds. As the gang is sleeping,a strange portal appears over Destiny Islands.It sucks up the three heroes and casts them onto the ground.The gang later wakes up. "Where are we",said Kairi,getting up off the grassy ground. Sora and Riku then get up and look around.They notice a castle. "We should get going",replied Sora. So the gang starts moving. My first fan fic.Please Rate and Comment.If there are supporters,I will continue the story.
to be honest...I don't understand is this story in present tense future tense or past tense? Also...seems a little rushed...
Is that bad?:( Sorry if it seems rushed.The other chapters will be better and longer. Oh,and this is present tense.It is soon after the message in a bottle comes.
Thank You! The next chapter will be up in a few hours. Oh,and allisonlover,This one will be longer and better.Trust me.:)
slow thing down a bit. you don't have to compleet the story with in 24 hours. take your time to write it.
