Traditional Art Malifecent,Ariel,Sora,Kairi,Kairi,Rikku,and first painting.

Maleficent(dragon)


Ariel


Sora


Kairi


Kairi


Rikku


My very first painting

 

They're not bad, just a few proportions to fix.
On the picture of Ariel, you need to make the right side of her face much smaller. Bring down the curve of where her cheek is, and straighten it slightly. Also make her right eye smaller, since it's on the side of her face thats farther away. The line of her nose wouldn't curve out as you get closer to the forwhead, it would curve inward. Her lips are a bit too thin, bring them out and lighten the lines there. Also bring her right shoulder in and make it smaller, since it's on the far side of her body.

The drawing of Sora looks good, maybe make his mouth longer and the crwon on his necklace larger. Be careful of how you draw the muscle bumps in his arm, don't make it too big.

Kairi's head and neck area is off proportion wise. Her head should be much larger, and her hair should be smaller height wise- bring it down closer to the head. Her neck should be thinner as well. And the line you have drawn for the nose looks like its going in the wrong direction, maybe make it curve out toward the left side of her face. Her tie is a bit too stiff, you have the 'folds' in the rest of her clothing, loosen up on the tie area.

Little Kairi looks good, just make sure the front of her dress isn't too flat.

Rikku's body looks fine, her face needs some work. Her eyes are a bit too high up, bring them down to around where the top of her nose is. Also make her eyes and nose a bit smaller, and maybe make her nose curve in some more. Bring the right side of neck in more to the head. And maybe add some more hair on the top and right sides of her head.

Overall they're a bit too flat, add some shading to them.

That is really good for your first painting! Keep painting, I'd like to more of your artwork =]

 

Thank you very much.The painting took me months.And thank you for the tips:)

 

ummm i think you need to work on proportians. the sora picture is really good! the arm could use a little work and the mouth is a little off but i think it looks really well drawn! rikku's hair is off no offence and you should work on ariels face. i think you did beautifully on the malifecent i really like it. over all well done!

 

all the drawings look so real. i would say try expanding and create different positions to stand in. ohter thank that, it's very good.