Hi! I knew my first storywasn't exactly the best!!! hopefully this is better... After hearing about Sora, Malcilax (pronounced: mal-chi-lax) knew there was something funny about him and decided to try and find him. After searching many worlds, she soon found Sora with Kairi and Riku in the Destiny Islands. She ran up to Sora and realised what was so funny about them. Sora was Malcilax's brother. It turned out that her, Riku Kairi and Sora had grown up together until Malcilax was about 5, then explored the island and found a little part which still hadn't been discovered by the rest of them. When the storm came, she survived by going into the portal in the sky - eventually leading to The World That Never Was. There, she had learnt about nobodies and as much as she wanted to be a member of Organisation 13, she couldn't because she wasn't a nobody. So anyway, here she was in the Destiny Islands, and said "Hey Sora! Its me! your little sister Malcilax, remember?" "Oh, I remember you! You still look like Sora, except your a girl version!" Kairi replied, excitedly. "...Malcilax???...is it...you?" said Riku, slowly-with a crush like smile Apparently, Riku had a little thing for her... So they went swimming at the beach, sat and talked, and Malcilax fit right in. ...just like old times THE END!!! Just so people know, malcilax's name is actually one of my friend's names - Camilla
hmmm...I'm not sure about it. I felt a little pity as a writer that it had no responses, so I obligated myself to read and post. I was expecting a little more out of the plot, which leaves something to be desired. It's a beautiful plot idea that I feel was not brought out to its atmost potential. Think with some help from an expert writer, you might make something real out of this?
