Make up the story plot for kh3 (Group Effort)

I don't know what to do for corruption, it still needs work. I'm all for him making the emblem desouls, though.

as for the level two keyblades, the keyblade would just transform in the middle of the battle. when the bosses health has gone down a bit. or it can transform back and forth, like the lingering spirit boss in kh2 fm.

 

Has anyone in Kingdom Hearts ever worn glasses?

 

you know what? I don't think anyone has. but Rin would be perfect with glasses. after all, glasses goes well with order.

btw, I just found out that if you type in: "fan fiction" Kh3, then we are number 9 on the list.

 

Whoa, Pezz, I never called dibs on Blaze, lol.
I don't mind doing his lines, but if you wanted him, then you can get his role. You'll just have to rewrite his lines eventually.

You guys really made some awesome keyblades there. I have plans for a flame-base keyblade for Blaze, and other little "something"-based Keys here and there. However, Paint sucks in making them, and I'm not too used to Photoline, so I think I'll just draw them.

 

Would you like to be do someone else? It seemed to me that you pretty much had Blaze's personality all figured out there. sorry about jumping to that conclusion. as for the flames that he uses, I think that they should be black flames or blue since he is a master of darkness. It would kinda be like dark flames. So wait, your making a different the keyblade of chaos?

 

I'll just draw whatever comes through my mind. Technically it should be the Keyblade of Chaos, yes, but I really thought about it in a fire-symbolic way. So I might just as well design several keys.


I'm not sure who should I do, character-wise.
lilbueno's got Turpis. This leaves Rin, Blaze, Oriens and Eclipse.
Knowing myself, I am best to work on someone who likes philosophical speeches, and likes making every quote as epic or clichéd as possible. Think of Xemnas, who talks like an orator... even when alone...
The question is, who would that be? There is Xehanort, but I think we're better off working together for the returning characters, since they already have a personality.

Okay, think think think...
Rin = Order. Blaze = Chaos. Oriens = Hope. Eclipse = Despair.
Blaze won't work. A creature of Chaos shouldn't talk like an orator, as far as my opinion goes.
Oriens souns like an optimist guy, since he's Hope. My own speeches aren't that positive, and they focus more on describing what's going on in the universe. So I would drop Oriens too.
The descriptive nature of my speeches make me want to go with Rin.
As for Ecplise, as a being of Despair, she should be more emotionnal in her speeches, and focus on bad aspects. An opposite of Oriens, of course.

Therefore, I'll go with Rin. I can picture the Keyblader of Order using an exagerated language and vocabulary. I don't really agree with her ideas, but I can get around that.

One final thing. Eventually, the Keybladers will absolutely have to mess with the Worlds. Therefore, Rin will be faced with a dillemma. She can't oppose Sora and co and Keybladers, because she would be fighting the forces of good. She can't let them act either, because they won't care about the world order.
Rin will probably try to convince them through words, and eventually by fighting, but will join when she realises that the Desouls must be stopped. Oriens shares her ideas to a certain point, so he can be the one to convinve her. Or even better, Riku. He really shares Rin's ideas, but will obviously realise he must break the rules before Rin does.

 

Hmm.... Rin huh? It would be interesting to see where you get with her. I think that I may still go with Despair. I picture her has being the kind of person whose methods of "protecting" the universe, as a whole, would bring despair to others. I don't think I'm going make her too emotional. but she will have an evil feel to her.

 

So:

Starseeker = Rin = Order
Pezz = Eclipse = Despair
lilbueno = Turpis = Corruption​

That leaves Oriens = Faith/Hope
and Blaze = Chaos

We should work on the Mystery Keyblader together

I'm currently working on Turpis' weapon. I'm making a few different sketches so far, one's based on a skull, two's based on the Desoul symbol (since he's the creator) and one on the anarchy symbol. So far I'm making all of them Axes but if anyone has an idea for another type of weapon, I would be glad to hear it

 

Well we are still waiting on Kme92 about this, though I'm not sure if character creation is his kind of thing. It would be nice if Brexen helped out. But Brexen tends to come and go. If he helped, then he would probably choose Blaze, I'm guessing.

as for Oriens, I have a feeling that he will be a character that would make me want to punch him in the face, lolz. Oriens is the just too positive for me to do. we would need someone who could do him right.

I like that skull idea for the keyblade.

 

lol i agree about Oriens, he seems..too perky. Kind of naive, he believes in the good in everyone lol

I think he'll be easier to flesh out once Rin's done. Just make him her polar opposite

 

We should probably make Oriens be a calm person. I don't think that he should see good in everyone, because then he'll be like another sora, or more like Goku.
He should believe in never giving up, but he should also know when to fall back and regroup. I can imagine him being a smart strong guy, if we do it this way. as a matter of fact, I think that his personality would be a lot better this way.

 

NOTE : If you read this and there are no pictures, it means that I failed to put them. Hang on a sec if that's the case ; I'll try to fic the problem ASAP and the Edit this Post.


I've been thinking abour Rin a bit, but mostly on her weapon.
Since Pezz already thought of that flail/whip-like Keyblade, I designed one too. Now, behold what I've done in my 3-hour useless and boring class today :



I lacked space at the end, but it's not too bad.
You can see traces of my eraser. That's because I remade the hilt several times, since I really overcharged it the first times. Now, it's lighter, but still pretty... "filled".

An exaplanation : You can see one side of the hilt having two "spikes" coming towards the hilt itself. This is an original idea I had, although strange. I told myself that Rin would grab the hilt, and hold the two spikes between her middle finger. Those spikes are inspired from Oathkeeper ; that's why I associated them with "Order".
I don't think this is very practical, though. A flail is an odd weapon, and I'm not sure how the shoick is transmitted upon impact. But it's not a big problem, since many Keyblades in KH games would be near impossible to swing in real life.

About a Keychain : lilbueno suggested that the Key Charm is directly connected to the weapon, without a Key Chain. The Charm, here, would be that curved square that looks like a star, just below the hilt.


Also, during the boring class, I made a prototype Chaos Key. This is the one I metionned a few Posts ago, and is definitely based around flames :



It may look difficult to understand, so lemme explain : all of the blade is made out of metal "sheets" ; thin layers of metal. The lines represent the edges of the metal. Therefore, this Keyblade has little to no 3-D depth. Think of Way to the Dawn ; it resembles it. WTTD is nearly flat, just like this Keyblade.

It features a pointy tip at the back of the hilt. Dangerous, but representative of Chaos. I didn't include a Key Charm here, unless we count the pointy hilt.

Also, the "fireball" that connects the hilt to the blade is slightly larger than the hilt, in the third dimension. Meaning that it would look like a broken glass, with the blade coming in from it.



If you have trouble understanding something, tell me, because I have an idea that would make the Keyblades easier to imagine in 3-D.

 

they both look very nice, but I feel ask if Rin's keyblade needs a more like look to it. Blaze's keyblade is perfect! I feel as though the colors should be black and red or black and orange. great drawings!

 

Come again? Thanks for your appreciation, but I don't understand your first sentence. Missed a word before "like"?

I might toy around with PhotoLine to color the Keyblades, when I get the time. Black and orange souns very nice.

 

They both look great Starseeker


Alright for mine, i spent a few minutes toying with a couple of ideas but i had a better idea.
Post ROUGH sketches of my three main ideas on here and let you guys decide which one you think is best and then I will refine, detail, and make a better draft of it.
What i actually did was draw an outline on my paper, load it to my comp and used Paint to make it easier to see.
I'm still working on another idea but that's a secret till i get a good grasp of what the image in my head.


(The green airbrushes on the keyblades represent holes. If it's not green its just design)
A: The skull, it honestly did not start out as a skull but once i got the idea i moved it around. The handle's the mouth, the bottom tips of the blades outline the eyes.
I want to make the skull more prominent in the blade, tho.

B. I used the DeSoul emblem as a base. The stars, well i was just tired of circles lol. This is very sloppy. I also got the idea from Pezz's corruption blade.
This one has a LOT of refining.

C:This one also started out as the emblem but I put the blades on the other side. The handle either needs to be longer or just be a straight pole, since this particular weapon should be held with two hands.

A and C are my favorites, which ever you guys think is best, I will use as the base for the final weapon.
I did all of this in a matter of minutes so if I get feedback quick, I could work all day during school (and that would look a lot better lol)and post my updates after work.

 

lolz, whoops. I don't even understand it now.

Translation: I think that Rin's keyblade needs more of a key like look to it.

 

Hmm... true, I rushed the tip because I was running out of time. I told myself that because she swings the weapon, it would be hard to control which side hits. The tip, being mostly two-dimensional, will hit with either side.
But yeah, it needs some refining.
I have an idea. I also have a boring class tomorrow, so I can use a bit of time to modify my existing design.

 

corruption keyblade A sparked a little inspiration. here's what I drew. this is just two basic designs. I think that this keyblade should be bigger. View attachment 2356

 

That looks...evil lol
I'm going to keep playing around with our ideas, I want a skull included really bad, no idea why.
I think I'll use the skull for the handle.
I had some random thoughts earlier
for example

1. Blaze and his connection to darkness. I think he should have a control over Heartless, not like Maleficent did, but a minor control. Maybe he could summon Neoshadows, I'll explain the full story after I hear your thoughts
2. Turpis and his power
3. Turpis and the DeSouls, such as his connection to them, and his keyblade plays a role in this
4. Mysterious Keyblader and Turpis. Turpis should know his identity, but in the end is defeated by Myst, I don't want him to be realize his mistakes and use his remaining energy to help defeat Xehanort, that's too Axel-like
5. Sora, Riku, Kairi, Mickey, Donald, GOofy, Jiminy, (and everybody else from here on out known as "the KH crew) finding out the Mysterious Keyblader's identity.

I need to think about those a little more before I elaborate.

 

I like the idea of someone dying, or at least be incapacitated, by Xehanort. That person will realise its mistakes too late, and will give the players a sense of seriousness for the remainder of the story.
Well thought.

I raelise I didn't say what Keyblades you made I think are cool. I'd say A and C, just like you did. B looks too... complex.
You mentionned C should be held like two-handed. I was thinking like a halbred/spear, but I think a simple two-handed grip can work too. You can have Turpis hold with both hands, but separated from one another by, say, 10 centimeters. That's a mix between how Sora holds his weapons, and how a spear is held. Anywya, it's just a suggestion.

Blaze controlling Heartless... ok, please explain further...



Oh, you remind me. About the Keyblades used by the Keybladers : they are different if we follow lilbueno's idea, stating that they have no Chain but a Charm. Now, I ask if their criteria for selecting people are the same as ordinary Keyblades.
Blaze and Turpis shouldn't be too attractive for the Keyblades. Think how Sora's Key wanted to go to Riku, but chose Sora when Riku chose Darkness.
So we need to clear this up.

Finally, seems that Oriens isn't too liked around here :D I gotta say that I found him to be the person I got the least interested in, at first sight. But we all know how first impressions can be wrong.

*winks at lilbueno*;)

I dunno why Oriens doesn't seem as interesting though... maybe because he's... on the good side. Blaze and Eclipse are anti-heroes, "Myst" is the villain playing cosplay, and Rin, well, we thought of her first, so she was exciting news.
That being said, we can't have three of us hating a character we created. Let's leave that to eventual fans :). Therefore, we need to spice up Oriens. If he's interested in leading Kairi to use her full powers, he can play a larger role in her story, and thus in the game. Or, at least he must be encountered early ; he'll get more attention.
Therefore, I suggest Oriens be the first Keyblader Sora encounters. Or did someone already suggest Sora meets the Mysterious Keyblader first?