Make up the story plot for kh3 (Group Effort)

No, Rin is not from DI and she shouldn't be that scared to use her powers. That would make her a wimp. If she was from DI, then she wouldn't have a problem with meddling in that world. She should be protective of the world order, but not too protective. Since Oriens is going to train Kairi, It should be him who meets Kairi on DI instead of Rin, or perhaps the both of them.

Also, having Riku go to DI for the second world, would be way too soon. DI is a good place to have a major scene take place. DI should wait awhile.

Another thing, we don't really need to know where the Keybladers came from.

You make a good point about the Keybladers connections. I agree, however I think that they all should at least know of each other. Oriens should have history with Eclipse and Turpis though.

 

We didn't even want this to become a clichéd thing, but it did. Maybe clichés happen a lot more than we think.

Love it! Thanks! And I'm glad you liked my idea as well! We're doing a great job at teamwork, I see, with everyone cooperating.

Whoops, this isn't as cool. I have trouble picturing it... besides, it'll go against Rin's principles to meddle in Disney Castle affairs, unless she's originary from there. Which would be weird!

I never siad she was scared. But she must moderate her travels, since her principles require that she stay out of other world's affairs.

Putting together all our ideas concerning Rin, her'es a suggestion :
She comes from Highnoon Hamlet. She has past connections with Turpis and Oriens, and still teams up with Oriens. She recently started visiting DI to watch the sunsets, because she can't do so on her world.
Kairi sees her at some point in the game, before the Heartless and Desouls come. It can be a brief shot, but I don't knoe when. Anyway, Kairi fights the Desouls, and then Rin and Oriens show up. Then they talk and Kairi leaves DI.

That's one of my concerns. But we have an alternative. Pezz said that Rin isn't TOO protective of the World Order, and I fully agree. Like I said, she can also dream of seeing new places, or just be curious. Therefore, she doesn't need someone to convince her of travelling throughout the worlds.
Or even better : Previously, she was a hard-core believer that she should not travel, but changed over time, because Oriens and Turpis. She understood that she can leave her homeland without meddling in other worlds, by staying hidden.

Now that SRK are on the road and Desouls are a growing threat, she moves from world to world, like all Keybladers. Her objective is to ensure that each world's Order is respected. So, if she stumbles upon Eclipse trying to explode a planet, she'll try to stop her, without ever interfering with the world's population. If she encounters Sora and notices he already knows half the world's people, she'll scold him for not keeping a low profile. If she encounters Turpis, she'll keep an eye on him, because she doesn't trust him, considering he left her and Oriens.
Also, she teams up with Oriens, but also travels on her own. She can't follow him everywhere.

Lastly, Oriens must've trained Rin at some point, and Turpis did so as well. This makes it interesting, since Rin has abilities learned from Hope and from Corruption. She's the youngest of the new Keybladers, whereas Oriens and Turpis are the two oldest. It's a pretty good teaching environment.

 

we need an objective for Rin. I say it has something to do with the mystery Keyblader. She should have a bad feeling about him or something.

We also need a reason why Blaze is after Malifeciant (Jeez, I can't spell that name). Malifeciant has been doing bad things for quite some time, so why now of all times does he decide to go after her?

 

interesting.

I don't recall her having the reports on heartless. I don't know if I like this reason as much.

 

I wonder if she could've been under both their tutoring at the same time. Since Turpis wasn't too evil back then, it's possible. An other idea is to have her be Turpis' apprentice, but then swtich to Oriens when Turpis goes around creating Desouls. Rin can be the one to notice that Turpis is doind suspicious stuff, and then report this to Oriens. Shortly after, Oriens will examine Turpis' research himself, discover a few incriminating stuff, ask for explanatations, and Turpis will leave. Then Oriens will take up Rin's teaching.
The second idea means that Rin is somewhat reluctant to use what Turpis taught her. Original, but unfortunately already used in KH. Riku was scared of the darkness and everything, so yeah. ... Wait a sec, ANOTHER link between Rin and Riku:blink::gunwtf::blink:???
Also, it means that Turpis can hold a grudge against Rin, since she "betrayed" him. But he can just as easily not care.





The Mystery Keyblader appeared recently, since he's actually he revived Xehanort (spoilers!!!).
If we want to use him for anything, then the stroy must happen a certain time after KH2.
When exactly does the story take place? Yeah, when they read Mickey's letter, but that's how long after KH?

Ok, so assuming we have a few months of time between the stories, then Myst can be used. And I know how to use him :

Rin's "general" objetive is to ensure each world's Order is undisturbed. She has been doing that for quite some time, but then came the Desouls. She knows a bit (or a lot) about them, and noticed that Myst appeared at the same time. Myst is also mysterious, and emanates a powerful aura. Since Rin was keeping an eye on the worlds, it's understandable that she's the one to notice the link between the Desouls and Myst.
So her "specific" objective is to find out who Myst is, because she knows he's someone that must be watched.

Going with my previous ideas, that's Rin's concern, up until Myst showed up.

 

Sounds pretty good, StarSeeker99. We still need to work on Blaze though. I'm a little out of it today, so I'm having trouble thinking up any good ideas

 

Well let's say Turpis and Oriens were good friends back in the day, and they both already had Keyblades, then something happened that affected both of them but completely differently. It kind of made Turpis think a little bit more evil but he didn't do anything bad, his personality just changed a little bit.
Then Rin got her keyblade and Turpis and Oriens came upon her in Highnoon Hamlet (maybe that's where they're from too?) and trained her. Rin noticed Turpis was a little bit..off but ORiens just told her nothing's wrong. Then Turpis started doing experiments and Rin found out, that's when she told Oriens and he confronted Turpis. Turpis and Oriens had a fight and Turpis left.
Oriens believed Turpis stopped his research and left Highnoon Hamlet, but unbeknownst to him, Turpis stayed on HH and just switched labs.
After he made the first accidental Desoul, the Desouls escaped his lab and attacked the town and Rin + Oriens fought them and barely managed to defeat them. Meanwhile, Turpis is in his lab trying to figure out what just happened when he is attacked by a Desoul and realizes he can control them. He then leaves for some reason that has to do with Xehanort, I need to think about this event a little bit more.
Rin comes across Myst on some world after separating from Oriens and belives he's Turpis at first. That's why she follows him.

that's just a rough idea

he wouldn't care, she would just be a nuisance to him, like Kairi but she would have been a nuisance for a longer time than Kairi

 

How bout when Turpis and Oriens first met, Turpis was jealous and yet intrigued about the fact that there were other keybladers. It could be a little like Sora's and Riku's relationship in KH1.

 

???? I was only making a comparison. I said it was similar, not the same.

 

I thought of that too. So I modeled them as friends who their separate ways, like Sora went to light and Riku with darkness, so they need to have history together and have been good friends. Turpis wouldn't be jealous, he would have just been best friends with Oriens. I think they should be from the same world and have discovered their keyblades at the same time.

I think you should

 

yeah, I agree.

If you make Turpis jealous or something, then it will be easier to explain why he went so wrong.

 

just out of curiosity, what program did you use to make it?

 

Really? does that program ever randomly crash for you? It does that to me every now and then.

Btw, it looks good, though you should probably add some sort of disclaimer and make it clear that we aren't making any game.

 

kk, good job! :D