Make Me Care

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  1. Luna Lovegood nani panda-kun

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    I agree, Risit is made of badassery. :3

    Great chapter (like seriously, though, no more 9 month waits between chapters, y'hear?). Need to find out more of Risit and Serenity's history, yeah? 8D
    Just a little bit of advice. Try to cut back on the "..."s. One dot would work fine in a lot of the instances you used those things. XD
     
    Luna Lovegood, Sep 25, 2010
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  2. Nova We left a scar size extra-large.

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    I love the characters and the imagery is brilliant. You left me wanting to read more. I loved Rhia. She fit in very well, and I'm curious to learn more about Risit's character. He seems interesting.

    All in all, very nice c:
     
    Nova, Sep 26, 2010
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  3. Arch Mana Knight

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    FFFFF-

    Damn it took so long to actually update. Nearly a year since the last time I did. Why did it take so long? School, stress, real life, RPing, and just general "not feeling into it" on updating. Don't worry! The story will pick up pace! I want to hurry up and finish this story.

    As for my other stories? KNIGHT's Code will probably be updated tomorrow...or even today if I feel like it! I have a Bleach fanfic that I don't plan on finishing however. >>


    Enough of that. This chapter is mostly a refresher on the story so far, a bunch of dialogue, and the narrator Damon talking about how he feels in the situation.

    UPDATED
     
    Arch, Aug 10, 2011
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  4. Aura Goddess

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    Morin got rather excited. XD This chapter was a bit slower than the rest, and did seem shorter as well, but I liked it! Now that you finally updated, I'm getting eager for the next couple chapters. The ending was rather amusing. Made me chuckle a bit. XD I was hoping to see more of Risittttt.

    I don't really have much else to say except I really, really hope you update quicker. You know I get impatient with your stories. Continue. <3
     
    Aura, Aug 10, 2011
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  5. Arch Mana Knight

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    Alright. Updated the story again. It'll probably end in two chapters. To be honest, I just want to hurry up and finish my current stories so I can get on with a new(and much bigger) one. A story that's been three/four years in the making!
     
    Arch, Mar 4, 2012
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  6. Aura Goddess

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    This was rather violent. D: Byron seems brutal too. ;__; I liked it. You should have told me sooner that you wrote this. ;~; Either way, I really liked it. It took me a while to read it. <<;;; I hope you write the next chapter soon. I really want to read what's going to happen next. I feel sorry for Damon. He got his ass handed to him. >< Anyway, write the next chapter soon. ;_;
     
    Aura, Mar 4, 2012
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