Make a poem of yourself?

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  1. Pistol Schoolboy Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Well, this seems like a good idea.
    How about we try to make serious, comedic, etc. poems of what we've been, what we are now, and what actually are our downsides and upsides.
    This idea popped into my head while writing Melodramatic Polaroid, so yeah, it's random.
    Come on, contribute please. It'll be fun. :D

    Previously Disaturous, Yet Safe.

    Never being able to grow his wings,
    Schizophrenia is what will only let him believe it will actually happen.
    But as the paranoia eases into sadism,
    Hearts are broken and love is begun.
    As you can see, the addition and subtraction isn't correct.

    Hiding through desginer clothes,
    A boy with what seems to be a fairy tale of excitement,
    But side effects occur like prescriptions.
    However, there will always be preventions.
    An angel, and two months later,
    You could say someone else is reborn.

    Youth and supposed perfection?
    Not any Edward, that's for sure.
    Not sounding narrcisstic,
    But it seems like words effect being, as always.
    Psychology has proven too much.
    Both in the past, and the finally visible present.
     
  2. SpazticFantaztic >:3 Kingdom Keeper

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    No one else is poetic enough to write poems like that... you win the "best poet" award.
     
  3. Pistol Schoolboy Gummi Ship Junkie

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    xD It doesn't have to be like mine.

    You can write a poem from your own perspective and words, and I bet it will be great.
    We all have equally great talents. And no matter if it's a first time or has been going on for what seems like ever. :3

    At least give it a shot.

     
  4. SpazticFantaztic >:3 Kingdom Keeper

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    Coming and going, just like the rain
    Sometimes I wonder if I'm even sane
    Trying to be funny, it comes out so strange
    And yet, all I know is I keep moving forward
    Trying to find my goal,
    Walking, walking, always walking
    It just never gets old.


    It kinda sucked, right?
     
  5. reptar REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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    roses are red
    violets are blue,
    it seems im not wearing any of those colors today
     
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