Luna's Poems

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  1. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    here is a poem i wrote after i lost my boyfriend.

    Here I stand
    Alone in the dark
    I think of you and dream
    But my dreams never came true
    You left me with a broken heart
    I cried and waited for your return
    But you never came
    There I laid myself to sleep
    And never again will I wake
    With the pain of losing you.​
     
  2. Shuhbooty moon child

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    I'm sorry for your loss...



    This poem was very deep.

    The words flowed and had feeling to them.

    Nice job. <83
     
  3. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    But you naver came
    should be
    But you never came.

    Nice poem.
    Anyway very sorry for your loss.
     
  4. Fellangel Bichael May

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    Aww. Sorry bout your loss. =,(

    Great poem. Very deep and emotional.
     
  5. Luna561 Traverse Town Homebody

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    More poems

    V~Together~V

    Here I lay, dying of an illness.
    I never get sick and slowly lose my life.
    I can't tell what caused it.
    No one cares.
    But I see you, at my side until the end.
    By the time my eyes closed, you cried my name.
    Days passed and you died of a broken heart.
    That is when I saw you again.
    And we get stayed together, forever.


    V~Love and Death~V

    The breeze of the wind.
    The smell of the spring air
    Reminds me of you.
    You meant the world to me.
    Now your gone and my world is dead.
    I feel nothing and see nothing.
    Why would you leave me?
    Winters are long and brutle.
    Summers are hot and dry.
    If you didn't leave, I would still be alive.
    The pain I felt was too much for my heart.
    That's the cause of my death.
    Now I live in a new world
    One with no pain, no love and no suffering.
    I still feel something's still missing in my heart.
    But I don't know anymore.