nothing is wrong with this, and you did the cut very good, only thing i think is unnessesary is the green lighting
Bump and dissapoint for lack of CnC, but then again I shouldn´t considering where I´m posting this. :v
The overall coloring is nice. It seems this took quite a bit of effort. One thing I don't find pleasant is the hair; it looks like play-doh. I think you should give it a more solid look, and give the hair some lines like in the original, because it looks smudged in some parts.
It´s because it IS all smudged, for retiring the manga-ness details I zoom like hell and smudge/blur it. =/ But yeah, will redo the hair later.