Lost

i wrote this poem today like 3 or 4 hours ago its mkay but i feel it need more what do you think

Lost

I thought I loved
you but in the end
I guess I was
wrong.
You seemed perfect
in every way but a
new seed was being
formed.
I no longer cared
about you and simply
saw you as a
friend.
All those mixed emotions
I felt for you were
slowly coming to an
end.
I began to care
for one thing and nothing
else.
The thing I looked
for could not be
found not even in my
house.
This abstract object
had me mad for I thought
it was forever
lost.
Yet I was determined
to find it no matter the
cost.
What possible thing
could have made me forget
you, you ask.
Easy, I decided
it was time to pull
off the mask.
It was time to look
for me.

 

excellent I really liked the flow off it, its verry berry

 

lol thanks i'm glad you liked it :)

 

hope ya make more :3

 

yeah i've had writer's block lately so idk but if you like it check out some of my old ones they're not too good but hey they're something

 

sure why not, lets see

 

hey just wondering if you checked any of my old poems out and if you liked any