Lost (no, not the show LOST XD)

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Zaria, Jun 13, 2007.

  1. Zaria Destiny Islands Resident

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    I was looking through my documents, and I found a poem that apparently I wrote. I don't even remember writing it o.O'

    I don’t feel right,
    I wish to see your face
    And feel your sweet embrace
    But now you’ve gone away.

    Now I must survive my heart’s pain,
    You’re in my past, now
    And I must stay sane.
    Even though your love’s no longer here,
    Each night my eyes still shed their tears.
    I’m lost without your gentle voice,
    But I must stay headstrong.
    You have wounded my heart,
    Making me numb without feeling.
    And now my dead heart is not worth healing.
    You have me just where you want me,
    And I push hatred towards you for that.
    But I can’t help it if I’m just a fool,
    Always having my heart set on you.
    My heart will never let you go.
    Though you’ve made me so cold

    I just copied and pasted, so if there's any grammar mistakes or anything, sry ^_^"
     
  2. N Hollow Bastion Committee

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    This should be in Creativity Corner. But a mod will move it anyways. I find stuff that I don't even remember writing and I'm like, LOL, when did I do this?
     
  3. Zaria Destiny Islands Resident

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    XD yeah; One time I found a 30-page story that I'd written when I was 11 XD

    ...darn; I thought I'd put it in the wrong place ><'
     
  4. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    I really like it!

    It actually goes great with a fanfic I'm writing...actually, it goes PERFECT with the fanfic I'm writing.
     
  5. Zaria Destiny Islands Resident

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    really? That's cool ^__^

    I can't remember exactly, but i think i wrote it for a fanfiction......i think XD
     
  6. Sanda Kingdom Keeper

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    Nice poem, I really like it too :3
     
  7. Peyton Goddess Of Love ♥

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    That was a sweet poem you wrote :3
     
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  9. Zaria Destiny Islands Resident

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    X3 Thanks guys; I didn't know so many people would reply to this o.o