Look through my Eyes Chapter 5

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  1. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    CHAPTER 5 IM ON A ROLL! (naw, just hyper!)

    Oh, and this one might get a *little* confusing. Just read and you'll be fine! Reread if you must ;)

    ~Chapter 5~

    Sora and Axel were walking through the Twilight Town market place. It was surprisingly empty. Axel couldn’t help but look at Sora every now and then. Sora noticed it, and looked up at Axel.
    “What?” He asked. Axel opened his mouth to say something, but changed his mind. He shook his head.
    “It’s nothing.” Suddenly, a huge mass of Heartless appeared, surrounding the two.
    “Stupid Heartless!” Axel said. Sora smiled.
    “We can take them.” Axel smiled back. He summoned his Chakrams, and Sora summoned his Keyblade—but it was the Ultima. Axel looked at him.
    “Where are your regular Keyblades?” he asked. Sora looked around nervously. A Heartless tried to attack, but Sora whacked it with his weapon and it faded.
    “I’ll tell you after we beat these guys.” Sora said. Axel nodded.
    “Right.” He said, and with that they began to fight.
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    “SORA!” Goofy called. They were all calling Sora’s name, trying to see if he was nearby.
    “SORA!!!!” Donald called. There was still no reply.
    “SO—“ Roxas stopped suddenly, staring off in a direction. Goofy walked up to him.
    “Roxas, what’s wrong?” he asked. Roxas pointed.
    “Look!” he said. Donald and goofy looked where he was pointing, and they saw a large black crowd of Heartless.
    “We’ll take care of them!” Roxas shouted, summoning his Oathkeeper and Oblivion, and then charging in to fight. Donald summoned his staff and Goofy summoned his shield and charged in after them.

    The fight was on…
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    Sora hit a Heartless with his Keyblade and it faded. He looked around. The number of Heartless had tripled, and he could no longer see Axel. I hope he’s ok… Sora thought, as he blocked a Heartless’ attack and counterattacked it. He was attacking intensely, and hadn’t noticed someone advancing towards him…
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    Roxas had eyed a Heartless, about as tall as he was. It was completely black. He walked carefully over to it and raised his Oathkeeper in preparation to attack. He got closer, and when he got close enough, he brought the weapon down hard on the Heartless’ head…
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    “OWWWW!!!” Sora yelled as something hard struck him in the back of his head. He collapsed to the ground, in a semi-unconscious state. His attacker raised its weapon, about to strike again…
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    Roxas was about to attack again when he realized that the Heartless wasn’t a Heartless—it was Sora! In his body! He dismissed his weapon and kneeled down next to Sora. He shook him gently.
    “Sora?” He went shake him again when all of the sudden a blast of fire knocked him away from Sora. Axel walked in front of Sora.
    “Stay away from Roxas!” He yelled, angry. Roxas was shocked.
    “What are you talking about? I’m—“ but then he remembered: At the moment, he was Sora. And Sora was Roxas. By this time Sora had sat up, rubbing the back of his head. Axel turned towards him and held out a hand to him. He helped Sora to his feet.
    “Roxas! You ok?” he asked. Sora nodded. He looked to see Donald and Goofy finishing off the last of the Heartless.
    “Donald! Goofy!” Sora shouted. They turned to see Sora, in Roxas’ body, calling them. They walked up to them. They looked at him.
    “So, you’re Sora?” Donald said to the Roxas body. Sora nodded. Goofy turned to the Sora body.
    “And you’re Roxas?” Roxas nodded. Axel was confused.
    “What’s going on?” he asked. “This is Roxas, not Sora!” he said pointing to the Roxas body. Sora turned to him.
    “No, I’m Sora.” Sora said. He then pointed to the Sora body. “And he’s Roxas.” Roxas then gave a quick summary of how they switched places. Axel looked at the Sora body with suspicion.
    “How do I really know this is Roxas?” He said, beckoning to the Sora body. Roxas walked up to him.
    “Last Saturday, you told me as secret of yours.” Roxas said. “You told me that Larxene makes you feel like—“
    “OK! I believe you! You’re Roxas!” Axel shouted, cutting Roxas off and blushing insanely. He then turned to Sora.
    “So I’ve been hanging out with you all day, huh?” he asked. Sora nodded. Axel laughed. “Funny. You may have seemed different to me, but it felt exactly like I was hanging out with Roxas.” Sora smiled.
    “I hate to interrupt this happy moment here,” Donald said, crossing his arms, “but how are we going to switch you two back?” Axel thought for a moment, and then he snapped his fingers and smiled.
    “I know just the person who can help…”
     
  2. Azure Flame Banned

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    ..........ROFLMFAO!!!!:D
     
  3. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    lol i liked that part too! (i love putting bits of humor in my stories) thanks! :D
     
  4. AnimeGirl104 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    whoa,whoe,whoa!you mean this is just gonna have 6 chapters?I was thinking It was gonna have as many chapters as the Vampir Nobody story*pouts*eh,oh well.you can't always have what you want!
     
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    clapps hands and jumps, Pwnsome
     
  6. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Sorry...It was a short story, sorta of like Larxene's Crush. Also, I was able to type it faster and post it faster, because i knew *exactly* what i was going to type :)

    TRUST ME. the next story will be longer :)
     
  7. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    love the bit when roxas starts to tell axels secret haha
     
  8. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    lol :) thanks!