Look through my Eyes Chapter 1

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  1. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Okay, the winning story was Look through my Eyes, so heres the first chapter! it may not be very long, but i gave you fair warning that this was a short story :)

    ~Chapter 1~

    Keyblades clash, swinging wildly. Roxas and Sora were fighting at Memory Skyscraper. Roxas had been sent there by the Organization to seek out a very old, yet very powerful, magic orb: The Twist Orb. The Twist Orb was capable of twisting time, space, anything. With it, the Organization XIII could do terrible things. Sora was also after it. King Mickey had told him that the Organization wanted it, and they had to get it before they did. Sora wouldn’t let him down.

    So there they were, battling it out. Roxas swung his Oathkeeper at Sora, who dodged it and parried the attack.
    “The orb belongs to the Organization!†Roxas shouted. Sora tried to strike Roxas with his Ultima weapon, but Roxas jumped in time.
    “Well you can’t have it!†Sora yelled back. They exchanged a few hits of the Keyblades, before Roxas jumped back.
    “Where is it?†he shouted. Sora gave him an angry look.
    “How should I know?†he replied, charging at Roxas. Roxas then jumped up to the top of the Skyscraper.
    “Get down here!†Sora yelled. Roxas laughed.
    “Make me!†he teased. Sora ran towards the building, and, he had picked up so much speed that he was able to run up the side easily. He jumped on top, where Roxas was waiting for him.
    “About time you arrived.†He said, mocking a yawn to taunt Sora. Sora gritted his teeth and charged at Roxas. The two resumed fighting, swinging their Keyblades and exchanging words. The sound of metal carried far in the World That Never Was, considering that it was mainly unpopulated and very silent. The two had been fighting so intensely that they didn’t even notice the brilliant white light coming from behind them. Roxas stopped fighting and stared. Sora gave him a confused look.
    “What are you looking at?†Sora asked, angrily. Sora then turned around to see what Roxas was looking at.

    It was The Twist Orb!

    Roxas then ran towards it. Sora ran next to him, and threw his Keyblade at his feet. Roxas tripped. Sora kept running. Roxas got to his feet, and, seeing how far away he was from Sora, flung his Oblivion at Sora. By now Sora had the orb in his hands, but Roxas’ Keyblade whacked his hands, and made him drop the orb—right off the side of the building! Roxas then jumped off the side towards it.
    I have to catch it! Roxas thought. Sora watched him jump, and then jumped himself.
    I can’t let him have it! Sora thought.
    Both of them at this point were free falling through the air, after the orb. Roxas had caught up to it and grabbed it. Just then, Sora threw his Keyblade at Roxas, and knocked the orb out of his hands. Sora had caught up with him. They were now facing each other, the orb between them.
    “It belongs to the Organization!†Roxas shouted, summoning his Oblivion.
    “It belongs to the realm of Light!†Sora shouted, summoning his Ultima.
    Both Keyblade masters raised their weapons, and struck at each other. Unfortunately, they had forgotten that the orb was between them. They struck The Twist Orb at the same time, and smashed it. An intense white-blue light emitted from the shattered orb, and engulfed Roxas and Sora, who were still falling.
    “What’s going on?†Sora yelled, but he doubt Roxas could hear him. Suddenly, he felt beside himself, like he was watching himself fall. Roxas had the same feeling too.

    All of the sudden, they hit something.

    Hard.

    There was cold.

    Then black.

    Only black…
     
  2. Yuffieone Merlin's Housekeeper

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    ahhhh oh how good!

    it to you to
     
  3. 2Foxxie4U ~The Forgotten Crusader...~

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    Whoa.... That'd be so cool if it was, like, a cutscene.... @-@

    CONTINUE!!!! =DDDDDDDDD
     
  4. AnimeGirl104 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    *gaps*SWEETNESS!!!!
     
  5. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    Sweet!!! Luv it so far!!!
     
  6. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    :D thanks! *gets to work on ch 2*

    The chapters dont take very long to type :)
     
  7. Yuffieone Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Of corse the one from the other story take a long time... two days now that I am counting am I right? Tapps foot.
     
  8. sT3pH!e313 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    TOTALLY AMAZING. Kudo's kid !
     
  9. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    chill! it'll get done :)

    Thanks! :D
     
  10. Yuffieone Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Sigh no one reads it any ways... oh well, I don't really care any more, just keep up with this one now that I read it!!!!
     
  11. Azure Flame Banned

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    It would be an AWESOME cutscene!:D Can't wait for more!
     
  12. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    I know! :D I wish it was!
     
  13. Black Sinner Twilight Town Denizen

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    Lol, that's a funny name. Twist Sphere...
    But seriously, that was a pretty good chapter. I'm gonna read the next one in a little bit.
     
  14. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    Thanks! *puts up ch 3 and works on ch 4*