I don´t like the render, I mean, the background don´t matches the render, too, I don´t like the background, it needs more flow, it needs something like smudging or something like that, but I know that this tag needs something, in the background or the render, I don´t know, but it needs something, sorry if I am too rought :sweatdrop:.
Is it normal that the render looks incredibly grainy? Anyway loving blending going on. The only part I hate is the text at the bottom which I can't read - 'gone so what?' Nice job again.
I kinda agree with Chaser007. The render doesn't really match too well. Along with some smudging. I also can't read the 3rd text sentence thing. I can read Gone so but then, can't read the last word.
** gone so young. It's supposed to be hard to read. And I was kind of going for the mixed 3-D 2-D elements, but whatevs. If I had time and effort I could replace the render. But I'll try to get rid of the grain-y ness.
Lol chaser. He bombed this thread easy lawl. It's good, not too shabby. Not your good ones though. Too grainy. Try adding depth. It'll help. And the text with the dreamt can be better. Otherwise GJ.
It is grainy, but not in the worse sense. Try to blur the left areas so it makes the light source not look so grainy. Add some 2-D brushing near her so that it blends some. Add some green color balances. I like this one.
I really like the background, you did a great job on it. as for the render: I don't really like it. Try maybe using another render of Yuna like this one: http://planetrenders.net/renders/displayimage.php?pos=-10134 (you don't have to use it) I love the placement of the writing, but not the fonts. Try Century Gothic for either the small or the big. Try Arial Black for the big one. I dunno, but i really like those fonts other than that, the signiture is really good. =]
