Living and Loving

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Sumi, Apr 17, 2009.

  1. Sumi suicidé

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    Living and Loving
    sadly only a dream is truly
    without hate

    all beings despise something
    be it rain or shine
    darkness or light

    be it the smell of toothpaste
    or the beloved being the rejector
    we cannot we one-sided and live only to love

    all beings are in love with something
    be it rain or shine
    darkness or light

    be it the taste of warm chocolate chip cookies
    or the person who could love in return as they walk past
    unknowingly
    we cannot be onesided and live only to hate
     
  2. Fellangel Bichael May

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    Nice! What's in there is very true.
     
  3. Sumi suicidé

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    Thank you~
    Written during Language Arts, 5th hour, in boredom.​
     
  4. Kenni-Chan King's Apprentice

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    That was really good, only, you may want to change the 'chocolate chip cookies', because to me that doesn't really fit in. But other than that, I think it's actually really good, I enjoyed it. <3