Little Poems

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  1. Rainbow~Monkey Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I wrote this during class today. there was a field trip and i forgot the permission slip so i sat in a classroom working all day, i had time to write this. its kinda corny:xD:

    Watching the clouds
    float so free
    makes me wonder
    how great it would be
    to float so free
    oh, how I'd feel
    to be a cloud floating free



    Yeah, I was kinda thinking like a hippy, nothing wrong with that.
    Please don't laugh at me. :o

    And I wrote this too. its kinda like a lil song sorta a poem idk.

    After years of suffering
    crying and pain
    it feels so great to be happy again

    my tears are gone
    I shout merrily
    my tears are gone
    will you sing with me
    my tears are gone
    my happiness is no longer pretend
    my tears are gone
    cuz ur such a good friend

    so much time I have wasted
    despondent, and ashamed
    in the darkness
    having doubts about life

    but now,

    my tears are gone
    thanks for all that you've done
    my tears are gone
    my new life has begun
    my tears are gone
    I'm no longer distraught
    my tears are gone
    my surreptitious longing of something
    has been filled
    with your love
     
  2. Riku-Sama's Shadow Hollow Bastion Committee

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    LOL the first one was sweetnuss i luvvled that one but the second one gives me the thought of a beaten kid 0.0
     
  3. Johnny Bravo Chaser

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    I love the first one the most :D Great job! :D
     
  4. LayceSatoshi Moogle Assistant

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    their both awesome. there's nuthin rong bout thingin like a hippy either. it normally can get the creative juices in ur mind flowing.