Line art version of a sketch I did for the same friend as the last one. So yeah, this looks a lot better than the original scan in my opinion, but since I'm color deaf or rather tasteless I won't be doing colored things for the time being. Yeah, go to town kiddies.
You've shot down my dream. Thanks. /: But anyways, IT'S AWESOME!!! =DDD I just love how you sketch. I just have any words to explain how awesome and beautiful this is. 100000000/10 =DDD
I like how your pen marks cover how she is. She is somewhat graceful, yet clumsy in my eyes. Very nice. She looks kind of dark as well, in my opinion. (: Great Job!
Dream? Care to clarify? Thank you for your input anyways. I didn't ink this one, I tend to suck with anything I can't erase, I used the original sketch and gimp to get a similar effect. Thank you for your input though.
That you are not gonna colour it, because you say that you have a bad taste in colours? Pfffft! I think it'll look awesome with the right colurs. xD
Arms are out of proportion, flesh out the neck and try to make the head look semi-realistic. Her torso is also a bit to long. The top part of her body seems to be very pointy and anime-like but her bottom half seems to be based in realism, keep a constant theme. Colors are unnecessary, try to add shading.
=D Okay, I'm so up for this job!! =DD But I have NO technology to actually do it myself. I'll just do what i can and then you could possible finish it? :3
True, need to do that, don't wanna, noted earlier but did not change (should do that), inconsistencies of unskilled self teaching(should alter), and shading scares me more than color I need to work half of a step at a time here. I appreciate the criticism more than positive review. It's up to you, I'm going back to edit based on Cin's criticism so I might as well add some finishing to it I guess.
You continue to be my favorite artist on KHV. Excellent work. This is alot better than your other ones. I wouldn't color it. Not because you're "color deaf" but because this style is very complex that color would make it look worse. 10/10
Okay, thanks. All right. Opinion is duly noted and comment is appreciated. I tried editing it a bit, but in the end I came out with something about the same. *Sighs* Back to the drawing board.
