Life

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Defame, May 29, 2009.

  1. Defame King's Apprentice

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    Life

    The paths we have to take,
    and the choices we always make.
    There's paths that we take alone,
    and some choices we have
    to make all on our own.

    All of us will grow up and learn,
    that we'll all take a different turn.
    The turns we take in our path of life,
    these turns that may lead to strife.

    Everyday problems we go through,
    there's problems that exist in other lives too.
    Having problems are not always wrong,
    having problems do not stay that long.

    Conflicts causes growth in many different ways,
    The lessons we will learn will always stay.
    The conflicts we gain as our years go on,
    Lessons we soon learn,
    makes us 1,000 times more strong.
     
  2. R3c0Nzi13 Banned

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    As my friend, Xendane, would so nonchalantly put it: "eeeeeeeeeeenteresting." As I would put it: "Nice job, it looks really well thought out, and the story in it all is brought out immensely."

    I'll let you decide which critique you prefer.
     
  3. Xendane Banned

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    Really, Emmet(R3c0Nzi13), must you constantly quote me? And belittle me at the same time?

    God, I hate you.
     
  4. Defame King's Apprentice

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    Thanks ..↑
     
  5. Xendane Banned

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    Yeah, man. No biggie.
     
  6. Fellangel Bichael May

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    Love your poem. Not only it's catchy, it has truth in it. Awesome job man!
     
  7. Defame King's Apprentice

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    yours is awesome too
     
  8. Cleopatra King's Apprentice

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    Well done thar. :'D it's truthful and its nicely put, kudos to you~ xD​