Hey, long time no see. I made a story. It is somthing like prequel to rp i had with gexion and Mixed Blessing. Nevermind, it isn´t hard to understand story. It is bit weird on beggining, but it will get better. It is raw version, so i didn´t corrected mistakes. You may vote if you like it or not. I will write more if you like it. Also, if you will like it, i will add pictures, fun-facts and other things related to this. Idea is mine, so no stealing. It has a bit of working on making spaces between articles, but i don´t care much about it So here comes story (and one thing, if you want to be negativistic, be at least creative) ´´I am locked in Arkham Asylum. They hold here most dangerous beings. I don´t know why am i here. I have to get away from here. My roommate offered his dark powers to me in return of freedom. He thinks i work here. I am locked, trapped, but not insane. Guy from other room, told me that we can pull out a plan to escape. He is good boy, pretty smart, and has dark powers. As i noticed, everybody here has only dark powers. I don´t know if it is by accident, or for a reason. I have to find out my true self. All i know is that i am number 0000101. We don´t have names. We are supposed to be silent, we can only talk to ourselves. I have telepatic powers, and some others, so i know what is going on here. I saw some extremly dangerous people here who can help me with what i plan. I am not counting days, becouse here is still night. My eyes are made to see in darkest night without light, so it isn´t much of pain for me. But my roommate has serious problems with it. I created special mask for him. From my wings. Thats right, i am angel. Fallen angel, but even darker. I am grandson of current Lord of this land. I guess. You can´t be sure about anything here. I made a special ability. I have something inside me. Something that heals me, keeps me sane and helps me. But i know that it is evil. It wants to show its form. It is called Chaos. I think i like it, but i fear it. My roomate says he would do anything for having something like that inside. Guy from other room, i think his number is 1111010 or something like that, is feared of this thing too. He is half insane, so it won´t be a problem to manipulate him´´guest (they call prisoners ´guests´) 0000101 said looking out from window. His roommate, only guest with 2 in his number was listening to him. ´´Sir´´number 2 said. This was his nickname. ´´You talk very nice. And you even know what are you talking about. You are my best friend´´number 2 said. He wasn´t insane, but his sanity was quickly decreasing. ´´Number 2, you are my best friend aswell. And thanks for your compliments, you know how to make person happy´´0000101 said and smiled. Number 2 walked to 0000101 and hugged him friendly. There was 20 cm difference between them. 0000101 was tallest from all prisoners. ´´Okay, thats enough´´0000101 said and pushed number 2 a bit. They had to go out from ´rooms´ (holding cells) and have free time with others. Some of them could talk to others, some weren´t able to walk out from cells. ´´Mister´´1111010 called on 0000101. ´´Yes?´´0000101 replied and turned to him. ´´I heard what were you saying and i am deeply touched. I wrote every sentence on paper and i read it again and again. Thanks´´1111010 said and waved to Number 2. Number 2 waved back and they looked on tower. It was control centre. It was sending waves that were made to ´make person good´, but they were decreasing sanity. Only strongest resisted these waves, and also those close to 0000101. ´´Miss´´0000101 called on one girl. She hadn´t number, becouse she was only girl in Asylum. ´´Yes, comrade´´she said and turned to him. ´´You look nice today´´0000101 said. ´´Thanks for compliment´´she said and walked closer to him. She had small red pluses on her shoulders, revealing that she was healer. ´´When do you plan to escape?´´she whispered to him. ´´Tommorow, i need one more day´´0000101 whispered and they walked back to rooms. *´´Grandpa, i handled it, i can control Evil now´´little kid said to ´young´ person. -Time is flowing differently there. This older person was 100 centuries old, but 100 earth centuries were same as 50 years on earth. So if you live 1 earth century here, it is like you lived 0,5 year on earth. Which isn´t long time. For better explanation: You live 2 centuries. On earth you would be only corpse. Here if you live 2 centuries, your body ages only 1 year. Got it?- ´´That is very good, you will be perfect warrior if you go like this´´grandpa said and patted younger ones head. ´´Look´´kid said and transformed (with lot of nosebleeds, trying and concentration) into small version of Evil. It lasted for second, but it was enough. For 8 years old kid it was marvelous. ´´You are genoius´´other kid, brother of this one said. His name was Gregory.* ´´Mister, you had flashback?´´number 2 asked. ´´Yeah, i was kid again. This being in me, it is called Evil. My memory...why can´t i think of anything? Even flashbacks are foggy´´0000101 said. ´´You had amnesia´´number 2 said. ´´Thanks´´0000101 replied and smiled on him. ´´Good night, V´´number 2 said. V was nickname of 0000101. He had red V tatoo on his back. It was only thing that remained from his memories. ´´Next day. Another day. More day. Less day. Much day. Many day. None day.´´was heard from room next to V and Number 2. Not from 1111010s, but from left one. Guy there was unable to move, he was only mumbling these words. He had number 0101011. V and Number 2 felt asleep and woke up next morning. They walked on court with others ´´Make a circle´´Number 2 said. Even those who couldn´t move were brought here to see this. V was going to destroy tower. Guards were prepared for this, they aimed many weapons on V, prepared to shoot him. ´´Divide and conquer´´Number 2 said and others repeated it. ´´Moon heal me´´V said and his body turned dark. Guards shot bullets on him, but they had no effect. ´´Moon, kill me´´V whispered and his body turned into Evil. Evil summoned his sword and others ran to shelters. ´´Planet Buster´´guards said in fear. This sword was created for only one reason. Destruction. It was irresistable force. ´´Crescent moon´´Evil said with demonic voice and destroyed tower with guards and felt on ground, bleeding from his head. ´´Oh my god´´1111010 said and as first run to V. ´´V are you okay?´´others asked when they gathered around. V moved his hand as sign that he survived this suicide. ´´Hero, hero, hero´´they shouted and turned him on his back. They saw most horrifing face. His face was burned and destroyed by power he used. She walked to V and made green line on his face ´´I reject´´ she said and his body turned into normal state, healed one. ´´Hey, i found who we are´´0101011 shouted and showed them papers with photos. They all took theirs and threw them in air. Only V didn´t had his paper. ´´Mister, we are sorry, but your paper was destroyed´´0101011 said. V opened his eyes and smiled ´´I don´t care. I know who i am. Victor Cedo´´Victor said and stood up. ´´Well, it would be nice to introduce ourselves. My name is Bleys´´1111010 said and they shook hands. ´´My name is Hector´´Number 2 said and they shook hands aswell. ´´Mio´´she said and waved. And this continued until everybody had his name. ´´All hail to Victor´´Hector said. They looked around, but couldn´t find him. ´´Victor´´Mio said, putting him on ground with his back to wall. ´´Re-le-ase´´Victor said and some weird metalic objects felt from everybodies neck. ´´I have an idea. We will follow Victor in whatever he is going to do´´Hector said and they all agreed. It was huge nation, about 100002 people. ´´We will build an empire. Here´´Victor said and coughed blood. They all looked scared, becouse their new leader was about to die. This blood went back into his body through clothes. ´´Wow´´Bleys said and helped Victor to stand up. ´´New dawn´´Victor said and they all shouted happily. ´´New dawn means there was night all this time´´Leviathan said. Levi was immortal drunkie. He wasn´t much of help, because he was agent of Hell. He was 5th in charge of Hell. ´´Go away´´Victor said next day. Levi dissapeared. ´´Where will we sleep? What will we eat?´´Bleys asked. Victor put two figers of right hand (second and third) on his forehead. ´´Re´´he said and stopped. All building felt on ground and bricks made one building. Victor felt on Bleys´s shoulder, and ´nation´ looked on building. It was about to be main hall. ´´Now you know all answers´´Hector said and took Victor on his shoulders. Building looked like Asylum, but without danger ´´This is our building´´Hector said and smiled. ´´So, we need to divide into groups. I doubt you know each other, so pick those who looks good with you´´Hector said, scratching his head with third hand. Hector had third ´spiritual´ hand. Everybody gathered around them in groups, only Hector, Vic, Mio and Bleys remained alone. ´´So we are one group´´Mio said and smiled. ´´And now what will everybody do. There are two main things to do: First, for strong groups, bring some material for buildings. Second, for weaker groups, bring some food and some more people´´Victor said, half unconscious. ´´Well, it seems we will have to stay here and look after Victor and work´´Hector said. Groups looked on him and agreed. Their leader had to be fit in order to lead them. There were 50 groups of people. Every group had 4 members. Others were too old or too weak to do anything. So they walked around, picking random light stuff, like steel poles, wires, wood and papers. ´´Victor, you are best leader´´Mio said, putting him into half-destroyed chair. ´´Thanks´´Victor said and slowly regained his strenght °°Don´t worry°°Chaos said in his mind. -Okay, it seems i showed you all signs i will use. -- = i am explaining something ** = flashback ´´´´ = talking °°°°= mind dialogue- After several hours, court in front of main hall started to fill with junk and people in light clothes. ´´Nice job´´Victor said and clapped lightly. He had bandaged head, becouse of his previous injury. He walked around this place with groups resting together. ´´They are smart. They live together. Like one family´´Victor said and looked on part of people that were clothed differently. ´´So, you are new people´´Victor said and they nodded. ´´Who wants to join me?´´Victor asked. Some people raised their hands. ´´Okay, good´´Victor said and pointed on others ide of field ´´Go there´´Victor explained and people slowly walked there. ´´Who knows how to handle weapon? Shooting on left, swords, pipes and similar on right´´Another bunch of people went on those sides. Small group remained unassigned. ´´Umn, ...´´Victor said and something in his head broke and he felt on ground. ´´His memory is coming back, no need to worry´´Bleys said and picked him from ground. ´´You people can clean this place´´Victor said after he woke up. ´´Clean?´´one woman asked and noticed building ´´I see´´she said, and with rest of people that were there walked inside this building.
i'm sorry, but polls aren't allowed in the creativity corner. i loved your story, but how about you use spaces and paragraphs. Loved it! xD
oops, this is first time i put poll, so sorry. Well, as i said, this is only raw version, i will edit it later, but now i need to be sure that it has meaning. And thanks
