Life is too short

Life sucks.
Give Up on tring to have everything.
Just be happy with what you got.
Life is way too short to be sad.
Trust me, all I am is sad and I hate it!
Put on a smile for once, ok?
Smile to make you feel better.
To make everyone around you fell better.
You think that you are all alone in this world.
But is where you are wrong.
There will always be one.
One to love you, to trust you, to pick you up when you are down.
But there must be an oppiste.
One to hate you and push you down.
But dont worry about that one.
If you always look at the bad side, the dark.
Then the light will never show.
So long I have looked for that one to pick me up,
And yet she was always there where I wasnt looking.
As there are hard and bad times,
There will always be good and happy times if you look hard enough.
So when those times come around,
Spend them with people you love with a smile on
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like it or hate it I couldnt care less. I was in a foul mood wishin someone dead so I grap my notebook and started to write and somehow got this. This is why my notebooks get full, I am always in a bad mood needing to be cheered up. Hope this helps some of you that are feeling down. There also might be one like this already but I needed it.

 

o this poem is sad but good
i can relate alot to this poem heh

 

Heh thank you I am glad you like it

 

yup ur a wonderful poet
u have some mistakes here n there but overall its great :D

 

love it! I like the meaning. your words are nice =]

 

Thank you I like it when others like my work

 

Your poem is good.

I just lol'ed becuase at first glance I thought all the stars at the end were swear words and I wondered what the poem was about.

I'm stupid.

But I like your poem XD
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Honestly, I can really relate to your poem, which is excellent by the way.
It's good to let your feelings out in a calm way... like writing in your notebook.

 

Thank you it was writing or hurting someone......

 

Cool.... Doesn't relate to me though...... Thanks for sharing! :rockband:

 

Ok glad all of you liked it