Digital Art Lie Lie Lie

Decided to try a new style. How's it working for me?
CnC?
I don't really like the text in the first two ;_;

 

You're all hoes for not giving CnC >___>

~BUMP~

 

they all look the same

 

i see!!!
the words lie, lie, lie are in differnt spots in each picture!!!
very clever!!!

 

At least JNZC got it. I suck at text placement so I put it in two different spots in the first two and took it out in the third just to see which looked better involving text.

But you two still fail hard for not giving any CnC which is what I asked for >___>
Read this to give a purpose to your lives > http://kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=12216

 

Well, is kinda dark, so make the lighting stronger, and some parts of it looks kinda bizzare, but apart that is kinda dark is very good, maybe sharpen the render a bit more.

 

I honestly didn't notice the text before you mentioned it. It seems to crowd up a lot in the sigs, there's so much action that it might be too much. Most of all there's a lot happening in the parts in the left and right of the sigs, if there's a way to calm it down more I suggest you do that, make it more part of the background. But remmeber not to leave out the guy if you do so, or else he may be the one to stand out too much.

 

I like it.

Heres CnC:

the text, I would make it bolder, so people, like me, realize there actually is text there.
the gold texture or whatever it is is nice, but try darkening it up a bit.
the red light is nice.

thats it. try some gradient maps.

 

Thanks for the CnC, I appreciate it =D

 

Might that be Serj Tankian? :D

This sig should have text, but move it near his bicep. I think that some small text would look good on here. Anyway, move the actual guy over a bit so that he comes out more and add a C4D or something behind him. The effects on the sides are very nice, but blur some parts to create depth. Make a light source that actually affects the guy.

Otherwise, this is really nice. GJ.