Digital Art Libera Me

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Plums, Aug 21, 2011.

  1. Plums Wakanda Forever

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    [from artist block]

    Kay, so I tried making things. But I am idea pooped. So here is what I have made so far:



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    Overall, I like the first avatar attempt and the redo signature best. Even though both signatures stink completely. CnC away kids.
     
  2. Amaury Chaser

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    They're very good, Ploo!

    My favorite has to be the first, mostly because of the boy and girl kissing.

    However, I also like the second one. The caption fits very nicely, too, especially considering that Roxas is a Nobody.
     
  3. Llave Superless Moderator

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    Amaury, I'm pretty sure it's two girls embracing... hahaa!

    Anywho, for the first ones, i believe the first one is the best. It has more color and does not look as choppy.

    As for the Ventus ones, I actually really like the first one. I like the words in that one better, it feels like it fits more. Also i like the colors in that one too, they feel faded, as if he is being erased. Whereas the second one looks more washed out. But i also like that effect as well.

    You did good, I really liked them. Hope to see more!
     
  4. Kayate King's Apprentice

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    Wow! I love the first signature.
    With Ventus's heart being locked in an "Eternal" slumber, and his resemblance and sharing a bit of his soul with Roxas.
    And because of Roxas's past constant brooding about his existance, why he was alive, how he came to be, et cetera.

    I'm jealous of your talent, Plums! ^^
     
  5. Guardian Soul hella sad & hella rad

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    I liked the first avatar out of the two. It's clean, simple and the positioning is decent, but I think you could've made the render smaller to have more space to work with. The second one looks a little unappealing with its heightened brightness.

    Are those circles? I see you've been copying Mis*shot*. But seriously I think it could've used more. Right now it just looks like a beige-ish void with a render, some circles and some text slapped on top of it. I think the composition could've needed more elements. You'd be amazed at how some simple things can make a composition better. For example, a simple circle in front of the render and some lighting could've created some depth, making it less flat and other elements like a C4D or paint splatters also could've been used to create some flow.
     
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    I like these, you are very talented Plums so be proud of yourself.

    The first avatar is a lot better than the second as the lines are more crisp and the colours are easier to make out, the one thing I would say as improvement would be maybe try a different placement, I like the current placement but it may be more effective if you zoom in on their faces more, but I'm only visualising at the moment.

    The tags are very simple yet effective, I prefer the second one as I prefer the red as it goes with Ventus, the green is nice but it just feels a bit plain when everything is green. With the second one the colours work well together and the render can easily be seen. The circles are also nice and artistic. Ventus does blend well with the background but you could do some experiementing with circles that overlay his arms or his body just to blend him in a bit more.

    But very nice, these are very well made.
     
  7. ShibuyaGato Transformation

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    I'm loving the tags here Plumsy.

    Did you mean to put "liberate" on the last one though...? I don't know, it's just bugging me.
    But besides my nitpicking, I love how you colored Ven in both tags. It just makes him stand out while still fitting in with the BG.

    You've made your sister proud and jelly at the same time~
     
  8. Iskandar King of Conquerors

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    I enjoy the sigs the most. The color is nice, and the brightness is nearly perfect, in a sense. And the words are pretty good, if not a little dark
     
  9. Plums Wakanda Forever

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    They're girls. xD
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    Yeah, I went overboard with the brightness there.

    May-*shot*

    While I was making it, I tried to throw in a C4D and some fractals, but I screwed up all of my layer settings, and had t delete most of them. ;__;
    Anyway, later when I try to mess with this again, I'll try to add some more elements after I figure out which layer setings (and which order of the layers) would work best.
    Thanks GS. <:

    And I'm also going to add some more layers atop the render. :B
    I think I only avoided that because I was playing around with using the paths tool and stuff got messy, but I'll try to do that this time. xD

    Thanks ENZAY. c:


    Also, @Cat: It was the name of this song. xD