Liar, Liar

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  1. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Some song I wrote today after my exam in 7th period. Here's all I have so far:

    Verse 1:

    I usually know a liar when I see one
    But you were the first to catch me off guard
    I believed every single word you spoke
    And I didn't know you would tear me apart
    Baby, how could I be so naive?
    I didn't notice what you did to me
    And now it's my turn to suffer
    But I'll be back to bring you down with me

    Chorus:

    I'm finding it hard to believe in anybody
    Ever since you came and crashed the party
    That I call my life
    So long, farewell, just forget about it
    You stupid loser, did you really doubt that
    I would be all right?
    Did I say I'd be crying for you?
    Well, I guess I wasn't telling the truth
    It seems we have something in common:
    We're both liars
     
  2. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    this kind of reminds me of missery business.

    But...it's different.

    very good, and very strong.
     
  3. Scott Pilgrim Banned

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    Very cruel sounding. Did someone deceive you recently?
     
  4. Rissy Queen of the Clouds

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    Yes, something for Paramore to sing. They sound like they would sing something along those lines.

    I like it. Very... My style. I love it.