Letters fall

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Tora-chan, Aug 11, 2008.

  1. Tora-chan Traverse Town Homebody

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    --I've noticed I've been going off to a different writting style for a little bit, I guess my mind is just trying new things. I'll post one of those new things. The words go down, and across!

    Everything
    Always
    Rendering
    This
    Heart

    Patience
    Lingers
    And
    Casts
    Encouragement

    Danger
    Awakens
    Ruthless
    Kills
    Not
    Everyone
    Shall
    Survive

    Tolerance
    Is
    My
    Endevour

    Letters
    Offer
    No
    Little
    Immunity
    Nor
    Eves
    Surpressed
    Silence


    --ok, so the words (vertical) kind of flow, and tell some sort of story. It's a mystery to even me lol. Some of the parts I don't really like so much, but Cnc from you guys would help please.--
     
  2. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    im not really sure what to say.

    its something new to me, but i think i see something.

    this is surely..one "different" writting style.

    its...nice, but not that clear, what is the message?

    well, im not sure, because i dont see much of a connection..between the parts, but somehow i think its good.
     
  3. ~Namine_Hearts~ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I agree. It is very different indeed. I dunno....i kinda like it though :]
    It doesnt seem like adding anything would do any good....so i think you should keep it the way it is.
     
  4. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    woah, i didnt notice the letters that go down.

    they just make it even better

    good work...i wanna try this.
     
  5. Deathsight44 Kingdom Keeper

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    Lol. Hmmmm. Only word that comes to mind about that is Neat. I think I'm gonna look for that in everyones posts ^_^