The effects are all skyrocketing in different directions. The colors are dry and saturated, and need more colors in pastels to help this piece pop. Also needs depth to help improve its composition. I like the style, but the tag in general feels incomplete.
I usually like simple tags like this, but it's just not really working. Get rid of that huge marking on the left-ish middle side. It's really annoying. Also, try having all the effect to go in one direction so it has flow
lol everyone had been saying this but there's too much negative space. and the pink thing that looks like an explosion makes the whole thing look weird. maybe take that away and put in some other effects and/or brushes to fill up the negative space as well. Keep on trying~