Traditional Art Let me know what you think.

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by xekushi, Aug 12, 2007.

  1. xekushi Gummi Ship Junkie

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    This is my first serious drawing in near 8 months so I'm completely off my game. Just want to know what people think of it.
    Its a picture of my character in the game Monster Hunter

    http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/62081690/

    I personally think it's horrid but I'm trying to get better again.
     
  2. Meh Gummi Ship Junkie

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    It seems a bit....chunky. And there are many things that don't really make sense to me. The hands, I can't see the face and the hair, the feet don't have much of a 3D sense. I would suggest shading and 'building-blocks' to get started again, so....yeah.
     
  3. xekushi Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thanks all that school work has pushed out the important stuff right out of my brain xD And i now the photo looks bad, it really does look better on paper and the face thing was just me being lazy.
     
  4. HOSPITAL STAT! i knock tits

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    I'll have to go with what this wise Meh says.

    Presentation is just as VITAL as getting your anatomy and perspective right. Guys, fix up your bloody drawings! Photoshop is specialized for that, and it doesn't even take more than a hour!

    Not bad though.
     
  5. xekushi Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I see what you mean but to me, drawing something on paper then Photoshoping it seems cheating in ways. Unless the whole thing was in PS. Thanks for the feedback though.
     
  6. HOSPITAL STAT! i knock tits

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    What I meant by presentation was removing the overly yellow colors, cropping the unneeded bits and basically positioning your drawing to make it look neat/presentable. Not tweaking the lineart itself. :/

    And no problem. (;
     
  7. Nexit@h XIV King's Apprentice

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    It looks really good, but I think that the right arm came out a bit too small. The armour is great as well as the weapon. One thing that I noticed and that I liked really much were the chains on his belt. Keep it up and your draws will come out perfect. ;)
     
  8. *dancewaterdance* King's Apprentice

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    I think it's a little chunky in some places, and a little small in others. And the face is hidden. But other than that, I think it looks ok :noworries:
     
  9. Xigbar The Freeshooter

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    The arms are in a bit of a distorted positon and it kinda bothers me, but besides that it looks fine.