EDIT: I moved the stovk over a little bit so it showed the other woman, and kept all the effects, and changed the coloring. V2 I expect my cnc to be at least 5 paragraphs, not including the intro paragraph.
I am in awe of it to be honest. I really like these. The colouring is superb as well it goes along with the subject nicely. *ahem* First I would say they are a bit bright, I would darken the curves and/or lower the brightness/contrast about 10ish or so. And since it is very bright, I can't tell if there are any foreground effects, but I would say add that if you haven't. I think some simple pen tooling would look nice, and blend it in to lighten or screen or such. Other than that they are erotic beyond belief.
Yes, they are bright. The render needs a bit more to be seen. And the text is hard to read. Try making it a bit darker and fixing the text. Overall, all of them looks really nice. This was done in gimp, yes?
get out if your not gonna cnc.im back mouse =D anyways its been a while since i cnc one of your tags. V.1 has to be the fowl best bro.the placement of the girl,the lighting,the effects. you really did a good job on this.i dont really have anything bad to say about it. good job =D.and keep on working on tags for me since i retired.