Legend of the Paupu

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  1. Shade Tail Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Chapter 1: What's happening?
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    “Kairi! Wake up lazy bum!†Standing over Kairi’s bed was Sora. Riku sneaked into the room quietly.
    “And that’s coming from the laziest bum of them all. You hungry? You’ve been here for nearly two hours now.â€
    Sora looked over to Riku hopelessly,
    “Sure, Kairi isn’t gonna be getting up any time soon…â€
    Riku pulled a paupu from his bag.
    “Wanna share this? It was the only one out there that was ready for picking, and-â€
    “Riku… Aren’t you bothered about that old folktale about the paupu?â€
    Riku laughed “Do you seriously believe that crap? It’s just fruit, it won’t hurt you.

    Sora moved his hand slowly toward Riku’s outstretched palm and took a half of the star-like fruit. He stared at it, wondering what powers lie past its yellow skin.
    “C’mon Sora, it’s not gonna eat itself!†Sora nodded and obeyed,
    “Sorry… I’m just kinda nervous…â€
    Suddenly, the paupu glowed brightly, filling the small room with a white light.
    “Riku…. What’s happening to me?â€
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    Hi guys, I'm back :)
    Hope you liked the first chapter of my new story.
    This will probably take some time to finish cos of school, and it's gonna be following the same kind of theme as my last 2 stories but just slightly different :3
     
  2. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    Wow... wonder what DID happened.. o.o

    Welcome back then~ The chapter is a little short but I seriously wanna know what happens next >w< Good job~! ;D
     
  3. Shade Tail Hollow Bastion Committee

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    :p I have a habit of making short chapters, but I think that was an awesome place to leave it >w<
     
  4. Jayn

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    D= I want to know what happened to Sora! Even though it's a bit short, it seems very interesting already. :3 ​
     
  5. Tikem Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Again, nice job. Classic Goimez.
     
  6. P E A N U T ~*~Never Surrender~*~

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    mmhmmm, interesting. This ought to be good xD.