You're a graphic genius, k? But seriously these look really good. The top one is probably my favorite since it doesn't look as pixelated, but I think the pixelated look of the second one works partially because the image you use has sort of ridged edged lines and it acts as a unifier. As for the top one I like the glow, it reminds me of the sky. I just can't really read what the text says on the top one, other than that it's all good.
I'm digging the first one. The second.... clipping masks don't always fit, especially with text. Compo could be tweaked slightly but that's just a personal thing. Keep it up brah.