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  1. ShibuyaGato Transformation

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    -sigh-

    Fine, I'll explain. But it'll be totally half-assed because I don't want to.

    It's simple in the fact that you kept the major points of most KHVfanfics. The staff destroy bots, the members congregate and talk. The usual stuff that happens on the forum every day.

    It's detailed because you added so many extra features (i.e. the bracelets, the rooms in which we hang out, the detail on describing each member's appearance, etc.) and that's what appeals to me.

    Good enough for ya, Teddy?
     
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  2. Te Deum Hollow Bastion Committee

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    :B Yes.

    I shall include more of that in my writing.


    (Hint: The next chapter is somewhat like Spiderman 3.)
     
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  3. ShibuyaGato Transformation

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    Well, I hope the special effects have improved-shot-

    Anyway, as long it's better than Spiderman 3 was, I'm cool with it.
     
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  4. Pinekaboo Chaser

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    Has terrible writing and requires a reboot afterwards? Or did you mean that there are emos in tight black outfits? I'm fine with either.
     
    Pinekaboo, Jan 2, 2012
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  5. ShibuyaGato Transformation

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    I majorly lol'd.
     
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  6. Te Deum Hollow Bastion Committee

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    ......

    Really having a hard time deciding.


    You'll see.


    I'M MISSING 7 MORE PARAGRAPHS DEAR LORD
     
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  7. ShibuyaGato Transformation

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    Why, you're making yourself write so much?

    Don't. That's the worst thing a writer can do. Just let it come to you. Hell, it took me a few hours to come up with the second part of my Sherlock fanfic.
     
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  8. Pinekaboo Chaser

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    [video=youtube;mFd6r9fw0rM]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mFd6r9fw0rM[/video]
     
    Pinekaboo, Jan 2, 2012
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  9. Te Deum Hollow Bastion Committee

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    It's for the members. I mean Users.



    I want to include as much people and events that I can so I can get to present day.


    4 PARAGRAPHS LEFT

    (remember they're short)
     
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  10. ShibuyaGato Transformation

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    Oh, well since they're so short, I guess it's be okay. Plus you seem quite motivated.

    Also DarkTraitor, I saw Leather Pants before it was cool.
     
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  11. Pinekaboo Chaser

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    Not a difficult task.
     
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  12. Te Deum Hollow Bastion Committee

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    wats leather pants
     
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  13. Pinekaboo Chaser

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    Uh
    They're pants
    Made of leather
    People wear them
     
    Pinekaboo, Jan 2, 2012
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  14. ShibuyaGato Transformation

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    Look it up. Marik x Bakura 5eva!

    Just kidding. Everyone knows that Yami x Yugi is the real OTP of Yu-Gi-Oh.
     
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  15. Te Deum Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Still completely clueless.
     
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  17. Te Deum Hollow Bastion Committee

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    To lazy.

    currently writing fanfic.
     
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  18. ShibuyaGato Transformation

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    'Kay. Look at it when you're done.
     
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    Yeah you will look at my leather pants when you're done.
     
    Pinekaboo, Jan 2, 2012
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  20. ShibuyaGato Transformation

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    Why am I speaking Freeeeeeeeench???

    I don't wanna be Freee-eeeeeeeeeench!
     
    ShibuyaGato, Jan 2, 2012
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