Digital Art Last attempt

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Valium, May 17, 2010.

  1. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    At a thread here as they usually get ignored =/
    GO FIGURE!!

    V1 [​IMG]
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    V? [​IMG]

    CnC and whatnot.
     
  2. reptar REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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    No! D:

    I usually don't respond because I have like no skills at all! I cannot give no proper CnC.

    Anyways I will try.

    I prefer V2, Since the speakers look like they are blaring and vibrating, The distort is a very nice touch.

    *cannot wait to get shot for the terrible opinion*
     
  3. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    I like these. I do like V2 better, because it has less edges, which I think you should soften up, around the headphones, and in the lines behind her.

    I do think it's quite good, though if it were me, I'd add more colors. That's just something personal, though.
     
  4. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Don't stress ;D

    Everything was originally different colours but i didn't pay enough attention to make sure that they all looked well together so i had to go with the gradient. I can put of the version without the gradient if you want.
     
  5. Misty gimme kiss

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    I'd like to see it. :3

    Overall really nice tag, though I feel the ultra visibility of the circles draws away from the stock -- which is already difficult to see with the weirdo gradient. I know that coloring style is kind of your thing, but I'd like to see you expand a bit more.
     
  6. Jade Traverse Town Homebody

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    I like V1 better. The filters don't really do so much for me.

    The vector shapes look decent, but as Misty said, they compete for the focus over your stock image. Still nice job overall, the concept is wonderful. :)
     
  7. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    Yeah, do post the other one. I want see what colors it originally had. Overall, I still think the edges need to be softened. I do enjoy the concept here, and it seems you're really good at this kinds of tags.

    I do agree with others, though the circles are somewhat like an extension of the stock, that's what I think, at least.
     
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  9. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    Well, I like this version much better, but the colors I don't like too much, but it's much cleaner. I think you should try a more solid color theme, rather than a whole rainbow. It distracts from the focal. I think the focal itself is a bit out of place. Why not keep working with the gradients a bit.

    On second thought, you shouldn't take what we say so critically. Just do what you feel is right. It's your vision, so it goes how you want.